aww i loved it

there is not many demon fanfics there should be more

i loved the romance well done i realy enjoyed it x

Aw wicked!

Excellent, lots of little funny bits in there this time...loved it!

Gem x

OMG. This is the best i've ever read. The best. Your plot and the way you portray the characters. I love it.!

...I love it so much...utterly adorable! Well done! :D

Yay, they finally admitted how they felt! well, without words, but still! great work xx

Aw excellent...well done Rupert...Love it!

Gem x

Haha, I see my threat worked...it was not an idle threat you know...
:)
This is esselent, better than the TV show (note the correct spelling of esselent, yes that is how all cool people write it lol)
Write more!
Or you meet Mr M. Flannel

Aw bless them...excellent chapter!

Gem x

Aw. Sadness. :(

Sorry for this sort of pointless review. I'm stunned by your awesomeness.

Haha. 'use the internet' That's my answer to everything! Galvin stole it!

Okay, well, you built up tension very well here, and I'm eager to read the next chappie, so here I go...

More! Write more!
NOW, or I shall repeatedly slap you round the face with a mouldy flannel!

:)

Oh! Couldn't Mina have killed Ruby!

Loved it, excellent chapter!

Gem x

Great chapter, looking forward to the next x

Bloody hell...be careful Galvin!

Love it!!

Gem x

i love this fic and i really cant wait for the next chapter,
there just arent enough Mina/Galvin + Ruby/Luke fics out there
thanks for writing this one i'm really enjoying it,
keep up the good work
Graciey xx