LULS, I've never seen hurt!Sebastian before. I've never even FATHOMED it. :D It was making me squeal, until the end where it got sad.. but I liked this a lot! Good job. :)

:O...wow :) nice, and they are very in character, too!

This is actually quite sweet... A fantastic job!

uwha poor Ciel.
loved it

Great! I really liked it--I think you hit their characters really well! Will there be a second chapter?

Very nice, though mostly I don't like reading about Sebastion being anything but the hell of a powerful butler that he is, you managed to make me enjoy this scenario as well, good job ^.^

I especially liked 'expression trapped between noble and mortified.'

I can totally imagine that, so funny!

Fairly believable situation and characterization--you show Sebastian in a slightly better light than the ruthless, scrupulous demon who we can never be sure is being truthful.

Very interesting story and writing style! Thanks for writing!

I liked it, it was different, and gave a new perspective on what happened after.

This was really good, I really liked the idea of Ciel actually having to do something and your writing is really smooth. In a couple places some of the dialogue seemed a bit off. Like Ciel saying heck, he seemes more direct than that. but it just be me. Also maybe some thesaurus here and there to help spice up would be nice. The linking of the fic into the story line and mentioning of the roses, funeral and flashbacks of Madame Red really help this along. Thanks for the great read. :D

D'AW.

The pancakes aren't the only fluffy things here.

Absolutely beautiful. Well written, descriptive, and a lovely portrayal of not only Ciel and his inner feelings, but his relationships with Sebastian and Madam Red. I very much enjoyed this. :D

I liked it very much. You are absolutely right. Even Sebastian wouldn't be completely healed after that injury. Not immediately. And I really think Ciel cares that much for his butler, no matter how stoic he likes to look all the time.