Wow this was perfect! Particulary I think Nine had a better relatioship with Rose than Ten had, I think they fit better and this fic made me squee of happiness (and other things) from the beginning till the end! Great job!

Frankly, I usually don't like to read erotica between the Doctor and Rose (or any DW relationships, now that I think about it; except Jack/Rose - that's always the exception because of Jack XD). There's always the possible alien anatomy to consider and all that junk. Gets baffling, really.

But I feel that you captured the passion and love that ran between Nine and Rose really nicely in their many bouts of lovemaking. (hearts) Which is why I loved this so much. My heart broke for the two of them when they realised they couldn't be together quite yet.

Nice little slip in of the Bad Wolf bit too. Everything's really just coming into a circle now, eh. (Though, I have to wonder how the heck Rose doesn't fall in love as easily as she did the first time in this case - or maybe she did and it was all repressed XD) Lots of handholding indeed. Nine you cheeky, big eared twit of an alien. (hearts)

Okay, I just have to say.

Omg I'm dying of laughter. Chapter 5 ending. Hilarious!

WOW! Amazing... need a shower, fast.

That was adorable. A-bloody-dorable. I loved it.

Good chapter.

Good chapter.

Great chapter. I love how possessive the Doctor is, but I also like that Rose argued with him. Loved the use of Jackie's lines too.

Great chapter. I liked that they pointed out all of the reasons why what they're doing is wrong, but also accept that none of it matters anyway.

Good chapter.

Great chapter.

Great chapter. Loved the way they met and everything.

So incredibly fantastic - I just loved this fic! Very believable and, as usual, your Nine is spot on perfect.

Nice one ]

What a lovely ending .

Jen x

I loved this story! Your imagery is awesome; so detailed. Thanks for sharing your talent!