Wow! Great job. I'm absolutely in LOVE with the scene you reference, where Booth talks about there being someone for everyone. And your "Pirates" reference made me laugh, too. Keep up the good work!

love it!

the best bit is that the oment where brennan an booth do finally kiss its so matter of fact, they are talking themselfs into it just like they would, i could see that happening straight away in my head!

exellent writing (:
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i love it. its so good. this needs to really happen

that was great loved it

Great story! So in character and just the right amount of fluff!!

hehe love it well done!

I liked this quite a bit. My only hang-up is grammatical issues, which there were a few of. Mostly comma and quotations errors, which only detract from the quality of the writing in that they are a distraction.

As for the story itself, I love that for once someone doesn't portray Booth as a complete lughead... he did have to go to college after all, he's not a complete idiot. Maybe in comparison to Brennan, but who isn't in comparison to her?

One line in particular really made me laugh:

"a little niggling voice in the back of his head yelling that ‘if you were waiting for the opportune moment, that was it’ in a horrible fake pirate accent."

I don't know what it was about the fake pirate accent that got me giggling, but I really couldn't stop because imagining it was so funny.

All in all, nice shot. :)

Aw i loved that bones/booth moment!
Hope there is more soon

Nice- loved it! (And I don't love many stories)

Interesting Story!

Good start, or good as a 1 shot. Brennan is always thinking and so this is plausible. It's fluff, so I like it:)

that's like... hot (:

I remember reading Plat's 'Symposium' back in first year and reading Aristophanes' speech and thinking that it was kinda weird, but had a nice message behind it all the same. I'm not someone who believes in soulmates, but it sure is a romantic concept.

Great story. "Man in the Outhouse" is an episode that's just begging for follow-up (maybe that's why I've written two) and I think you did a terrific job. It was so painfully obvious that he was talking about them and I KNOW she saw it in his face.

“I’d definitely like to leave the bedroom, there’s so many other more interesting rooms to explore” LOL, that's awesome. I love how it really is clear that Booth fulfills all of her needs. I don't remember the episode, but remember when Brennan and Zack talked about how it was irrational to expect to be able to find everything in one person? She clearly has.

Terrific job!

Leah

sexy!! cool!!


HawkAngel

Love it! Very realistic scene with both of them in character.