Really good is there anymore I think it could use another chapter but that's just me :P

:3

That was really cute, I swear

The only thing I could recommend, is that you work on your grammar.

Like, there should not be more than one and in a phrase. "I washed my hair and brushed my teeth and ate breakfast," should be "I washed my hair, brushed my teeth, and ate breakfast,"

Simple things like that

Otherwise, I think you did well.

I did notice that you were missing a period here and there, but it happens to the best of us. (:

:3 Tchh- Panini, Y U NO LOVE CHOWDER/GORGONZOLA? D:

i like _

this is sort of gay but i sort of like it

i dont know about that kissing and the public toilets part so...

nevar mind! well thanks on repying on that guy who is not really getting a lot of reviews his name again?

This Fanfic shows sich potential. The part when Gorgonzola told Panini to leave was funny and when he mentioned the shrine!

cool story! i likes it u

This was a good story though the part where Chowder called out

rape against Panini was a little weird, and the part with that

a-hole Corgonzola kissing him was disturbing lol Ahh! Sorry to

jump on your case but it's Schnitzel! Nobody seems to spell it

right lol No worries, your story was cool beans :)

LMAO! Oh poor Chowder. You got the characters straight on, and for a wacky cartoon, that's pretty darn hard to do.

(Personally, I'm all about Schnitzel...I think I'm going to get a tattoo of him next...lol)

A few minor mistakes, but still good, yet confusing because you jump actions. For example, at one point you say Panini's expression changes, then you say she was still hugging him.

But this was good, though, for a first time.

i luvd ur storey omg! :)