|Reviews for Billow|
| Dimac99 5/21/13 . chapter 24
Really loved it, esp Grandma Lux, she was great :-)
| Arime Setta 5/12/13 . chapter 24
Very enjoyable! Working my way through stories with high numbers of reviews and your stories just seem to keep popping up - and with good reason! Wonderful story yet again!
| LazyNezumi 5/1/13 . chapter 24
Ahhh this was such nice story... :3
I really loved it :D
And Hermione as Transfiguration Professor is best thing ever :DD
Thanks so much for writing and posting!
Now I shall go and read sequel and all your other stories *grins*
| chyaraskiss 4/17/13 . chapter 24
I really enjoyed this fic. Though this last chapter felt like it should have come later.
I would have loved to see final scene's with any children they may have had.
Scene's with Hermione standing up to Harry, Ron, and Ginny. Making sure they were put into their place.
| Carma Bain Bentley 3/15/13 . chapter 24
Which story is the sequal? I cant seem to find in your story list. Great job by the way. Hope you reply though, i really loved this story.
| Eru no Tsubasa 2/18/13 . chapter 24
Aww! Adorable and well-written! XD
| Eru no Tsubasa 2/17/13 . chapter 7
"Concurrently they shall die the little death again and again until they'll be two no more."
Die the little death? Is that what I think it is or am I just reading too much into it? *giggles immaturely*
| Guest 2/6/13 . chapter 24
This was so beautiful! Thank you!
| Guest 2/6/13 . chapter 14
excellent excellent writing!
| PrinzessinLeia 11/26/12 . chapter 24
ich bin froh, dass ich das Rev in deutsch verfassen kann, denn mein Englisch ist mehr als schlecht.
600 Reviews sprechen eigentlich für sich. Trotzdem: diese Geschichte ist großartig. Du beschreibst sehr eindrücklich, wie Hermione und Severus sich langsam näher kommen und wie die Freundschaft des goldenen Trios zerbricht und Oma Lux ist die Krönung. Gelacht habe ich, als Severus den beiden Jungs Glatzen gehext hat. Die bildliche Vorstellung die beiden ohne Haare zu sehen ist schon witzig.
Ich muss gestehen, dass ich die ersten 15 Kapitel auf deutsch gelesen habe. Da die Übersetzung nicht fertiggestellt wurde, musste ich mich auf das Original stürzen. *stöhn*
Danke für die herrlichen Lesestunden die ich mit Deiner Geschichte verbracht habe.
| jada951 8/16/12 . chapter 24
a very enjoyable story.
thank you for sharing it!
| Guest 7/17/12 . chapter 24
| Majerus 6/28/12 . chapter 1
Starting with your beginning, though not my favorite pairing (by a stretch), I've seen what you can do with Severus so I'll give it a read :)
| 220.127.116.11.nolongerinuse18.104.22.168 3/4/12 . chapter 24
Read this a few days ago but wasn't able to log on to review.
Anyway, to simply put it- this was bloody brilliant, I loved it :D
| celvin69hotmail.co.uk 2/25/12 . chapter 1
Interesting, keeps the feel of the originals somewhat. You need to work on punctuation a little: try using ; and : some more to break up sentences. Also, try to use some descriptive passages to create more of an atmosphere and to recreate the feel and texture of Rowling's world a little more. For example: McGonagall is in a room. What sort of room? Is it light or dark? Do piles of ancient manuscripts clutter up the mahogany tabletops, while flickering candlelight casts dancing shadows over bare stone walls?
However, these aren't criticisms, just friendly advice. You obviously enjoyed the originals; that love does come through in your chapter, and I recommend you keep it up. You have some nice ideas, especially with Hermione as a teacher, and you'll find that the more you write, the further into the story you get yourself and the better your writing style will become.
Good luck, and keep it up :)