This was good.

I hold back my squishy tomatos of justice that I pelt any stupid Doyle story I find with. This was truly a nice peice of work, could've been an acutal episode. I'll put on my favorates list as soon as I post something on this site.
Cheers, mate.

that is really cruel. I feel really sorry for Angel. *sob* poor angel *sob*

That was pretty good. There were a few things that needed to be fixed (mainly typos), but the concept was wonderful and well-executed. And, of course, any story that denies that Doyle died gets extra points in my book :)

This is a skillfully plotted little thriller with right-on characterizations and dialogue, as well as a surprising plot twist that rings true. You can hear the authentic voices of Cordelia, Doyle and Angel. This fic shows so well why "Angel" needs Doyle. No one else could ever replace him!

Great story Ris! Really great ending. Congrats.

P.S. NO! :)

This was a really good story. Could have been an episode even. I'm with Cordelia though, they couldn't have just let Charlotte go on killing people.

Wow... all I can say is ... wow. Ha ha... that was really good, Kristen.. two thumbs up, way up!