Chapter 2 was just hilarious. I'm glad you did a sequel. Poor Hidan.

omg, i just realized why it's called FWD! anyway, i lovethe sudden change of heart

lmao, this was great!

LaWL
i want another
one!

oh good lord i love it! haha love your writing style! LaWL

I should have seen Hidan's retort coming...but I still laughed my @$$ off. XD

Plus, Jashin-sama will guarantee you a place in heaven, or Shangri La, or wherever the fuck we go after death.
Shangri La? You a Juggalo too? When I die, sell my soul to Shangri La, place me in my grave with two hatchets crossed on my chest and twin broken matchsticks at my feet!

good story n.n
that hidan...he doesn't understant that sasori and deidara are just friends...
yeah,right :3
see ya!

I basically have actual critique, I loved this, I didn't think they would do it. So someone ruined Watchmen for you, didn't they? XD Seriously though, Awesome Job

That was hilarious. A little childish as far as they were acting but regardless, hilarious. Loved how you ended it with Kakuzu. And I totally agree, they're morons (back to the childish behavior between the three of them). I love Akatsuki-based fan fics, too.

OMG! I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT! Freakin' hilarious. *sigh* I don't care if they're OOC or AU... i love it when people mess up the Akatsuki's personality and make them funnier than they seem all ready. great job!

LAWL