 Alice745458 9/18/10 . chapter 7brilliant i love it! im sorry your sister died! :) |
 ms.diamondpearl 6/24/10 . chapter 3This ones not bad it was actually really good short and sweet |
 Katia11 6/21/10 . chapter 7Hmm, beauitful! ) |
 JESUSFREAK-And-Proud-Of-It 3/16/10 . chapter 7Ha, the image of Aang giving up on Katara for On Ji...made me fall to pieces in hysterical laughter. Good to know I'm that biased, right? But he is too, so that's okay. Love the one-shots. They were brilliant. :P |
 JESUSFREAK-And-Proud-Of-It 3/16/10 . chapter 6I could picture this scene so well. Your listed descriptions of them at the beginning struck me as a very unique way to introduce them, without jumping in and using their names right away. Maybe I just haven't been around long enough. Who knows? :P |
 JESUSFREAK-And-Proud-Of-It 3/16/10 . chapter 5Aang's so sweet. I love how you captured his willingness-yet helplessness-in comforting Katara with what she really had to bear alone. :) |
 JESUSFREAK-And-Proud-Of-It 3/16/10 . chapter 4Nice. I loved the idea of the airbenders committing to one life or the other. It must've been a difficult choice. :P |
 JESUSFREAK-And-Proud-Of-It 3/16/10 . chapter 2The ending was epic. Typical Toph. You keep them very in-character. Wonderful job. :P |
 JESUSFREAK-And-Proud-Of-It 3/16/10 . chapter 1*SQUEE*
*passes out from immature fangirl excitement* |
 iloverieu 2/15/10 . chapter 2i liked this one a lot xD |
 milktart lover 12/30/09 . chapter 2 !
i love this chapter,expecialy the last line!
-warning: there may be some spelling errors in this message thanck u.
-milktart |
 Twilighthippie1 9/3/09 . chapter 7this was very good! keep writing! Twilighthippie1 |
 avkanar00 6/5/09 . chapter 2“…About how hot you make Katara.”
“Toph!”
XD I Will NEVER forget that!
(Just because I've never said it, you're my favourite author in fanfiction! I LOVE your stories!
Sorry for my bad English) |
 samtana 3/24/09 . chapter 7I liked this snapshot. It did seem like Toph's kind of wedding. I never really thought about a Fire Nation wedding before. Would a nation in such a hot place normally have such heavy garments? Maybe the Fire Nation citizens can handle it, but Katara and Sokka would have a hard time, so they were considerate. Nice chapter.
By the way, to clarify my review about the last chapter, I thought it was touching even though it was sad. Aang can do his best, but how could it ever be enough?
-samtana |
 samtana 3/24/09 . chapter 5This was touching. I liked it,
-samtana |