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longnite
2009-08-16 . chapter 1
Now, thats one way to get our favorite archeologist "digging" around to please Vala! And I knew that Daniel would give the shirt off his back for her...and just a bit more if he got a clue. Well done!;)
starjems88
2009-05-17 . chapter 1
loved it:)
Aeyame
2009-04-06 . chapter 1
Very fucking awesome.
curriejean
2009-04-01 . chapter 1
Egh.

A steamy story, but for the central plot element. Vagina bugs? Having dinner? Reading this was like getting an electric shock for my interet. I don't mean that to be harsh, but bugs are gross on their own, never mind vaginal panty-bugs.

*wanders off wondering why Vala's frenzy suddenly PAUSED when she realized the full nastiness of her predicament*
LauraDean
2009-03-30 . chapter 1
Absolutely adorable! :3
Extant
2009-03-26 . chapter 1
EW!
Myosotis13
2009-03-10 . chapter 1
That was adorable! Very...well very real. You could definitely feel the tension there. Honestly I wonder what Vala was thinking--pretty sure she was having as hard a time as Daniel :D. (Erm. No pun intended.)

Hehe lovely little piece. Poor bug. Such a violent death after making your readers so happy :D.

Hugs,
Myosotis
CaramelMonkey
2009-03-09 . chapter 1
That was hilarious! Hahha. I laughed when Daniel suished the bug...violently. He had good reason to though. It HAD caused him a lot of trouble. ;)
childofspacegypsy1
2009-03-09 . chapter 1
I decided to try reason, but instead I said. “Okay.” LMAO. Yes, the bug certainly didn't deserve to die for doing in minutes what Vala has benn trying for years!!
skypilot-dlm
2009-03-09 . chapter 1
That was wonderful, and rather funny, too! Ah, Daniel and Vala, the things they get themselves into. Again, great story, well done.
Oldlibrn
2009-03-09 . chapter 1
I can just see V jumping around and pulling off her clothes in the double moonlight in some abandoned ruins. How could D not lose control.
Fun story.
acer-sigma
2009-03-09 . chapter 1
"Taking a firm hold I snatched the little thief and dropped it to the floor and irrationally stomped it to death!"

Hm...is it me or does Daniel seem a bit jealous. ;)

Anyways, good story!
Devilish Me
2009-03-09 . chapter 1
Very nice!:D :D
Samvalasam
2009-03-08 . chapter 1
haha...good one
:D sam
insertwickedpennamehere
2009-03-08 . chapter 1
yummy. ;) great job on this one. hot, but not super graphic. my kind of story. :]] can't wait for more from you.
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