 longnite 2009-08-16 . chapter 1Now, thats one way to get our favorite archeologist "digging" around to please Vala! And I knew that Daniel would give the shirt off his back for her...and just a bit more if he got a clue. Well done!;) |
 starjems88 2009-05-17 . chapter 1loved it:) |
 Aeyame 2009-04-06 . chapter 1Very fucking awesome. |
 curriejean 2009-04-01 . chapter 1Egh.
A steamy story, but for the central plot element. Vagina bugs? Having dinner? Reading this was like getting an electric shock for my interet. I don't mean that to be harsh, but bugs are gross on their own, never mind vaginal panty-bugs.
*wanders off wondering why Vala's frenzy suddenly PAUSED when she realized the full nastiness of her predicament* |
 LauraDean 2009-03-30 . chapter 1Absolutely adorable! :3 |
 Extant 2009-03-26 . chapter 1 EW! |
 Myosotis13 2009-03-10 . chapter 1That was adorable! Very...well very real. You could definitely feel the tension there. Honestly I wonder what Vala was thinking--pretty sure she was having as hard a time as Daniel :D. (Erm. No pun intended.)
Hehe lovely little piece. Poor bug. Such a violent death after making your readers so happy :D.
Hugs,
Myosotis |
 CaramelMonkey 2009-03-09 . chapter 1That was hilarious! Hahha. I laughed when Daniel suished the bug...violently. He had good reason to though. It HAD caused him a lot of trouble. ;) |
 childofspacegypsy1 2009-03-09 . chapter 1I decided to try reason, but instead I said. “Okay.” LMAO. Yes, the bug certainly didn't deserve to die for doing in minutes what Vala has benn trying for years!! |
 skypilot-dlm 2009-03-09 . chapter 1That was wonderful, and rather funny, too! Ah, Daniel and Vala, the things they get themselves into. Again, great story, well done. |
 Oldlibrn 2009-03-09 . chapter 1I can just see V jumping around and pulling off her clothes in the double moonlight in some abandoned ruins. How could D not lose control.
Fun story. |
 acer-sigma 2009-03-09 . chapter 1"Taking a firm hold I snatched the little thief and dropped it to the floor and irrationally stomped it to death!"
Hm...is it me or does Daniel seem a bit jealous. ;)
Anyways, good story! |
 Devilish Me 2009-03-09 . chapter 1Very nice!:D :D |
 Samvalasam 2009-03-08 . chapter 1haha...good one
:D sam |
 insertwickedpennamehere 2009-03-08 . chapter 1yummy. ;) great job on this one. hot, but not super graphic. my kind of story. :]] can't wait for more from you. |