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Reviews for: Feathers
Cuenta
2009-08-10 . chapter 6
I really like how you use the parentheses. Great piece as always. :D
Cuenta
2009-04-07 . chapter 5
That was beautiful and thought provoking. It made me think and it's actually true about the other Sakuras.

Correction:

"Is her hair short too or is it long and silky." Question mark at the end.
SkyLilies
2009-03-31 . chapter 4
Like all your Tsubasa vignettes, this one makes me sad...but it's beautifully written and makes me empathise with Syaoran even more.
SkyLilies
2009-03-31 . chapter 3
Aie KuroTomo is my secret series love too! I love this little Kuro-daddy vignette, you have all their voices down exactly right and it's a pleasure to read.
Cuenta
2009-03-30 . chapter 4
Those two were short and sweet. I like the Kurogane one, especially since you kept him in character. And Hide and Seek was adorable. Again, good job on coveying their feelings.
SkyLilies
2009-03-27 . chapter 1
Oh Tsubasa is just such a SAD story- but I love the way you've caught Sakura's feelings about her lost memories and Syaoran, it's pretty well perfect.
Cuenta
2009-03-24 . chapter 2
That was moving. I like how it connects to Syaoran's emotions about their relationship and how the journey will affect their relationship.
Lover of Stories 24
2009-03-14 . chapter 1
Cheers for Tsubasa. =^.^= You wrote this very well, and I think it fits Sakura nicely. I loved the way you described her memories and used the comparison of "water leaking out of the crevasses of her hand." It's a beautiful oneshot, and just leaves me wanting to read another.

Tsubasa has gotten a lot darker than it was in the beginning, and a lot more confusing. (The last volume I read was volume 20.) It's not as fluffy, and it makes me feel more sadness for the characters. I really want it to end happily...

Anyways, keep up the great writing. It's always a joy to read. =) May your pen never run out of ink~
IceQueen
2009-03-09 . chapter 1
How cute!
Cuenta
2009-03-09 . chapter 1
Very good imagery and word choice. Well written. I look forward to the next one when you're able to.
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