I loved this story... it was beautiful. Absolutely deserves more than 9 reviews! Almost made me cry, and that is very difficult. so congratz on writing this fantastic story. It would be awesome if it was longer and the different parts of their life together was a chapter.

That was pretty depressing! It was good though!

thanks for putting up my review! that was really nice of you. if you want to bounce ideas around or talk, here is my e-mail:

thanks again for putting the review up and it still brought tears to my eyes even though i have read it like times.

ttyl

Shea

I love this story. True love is made for fictional charecters.

you maken me cry. and that ain't normal. i loved it and it brough tears to my eyes. edward won the battle but lost the war. and why did the son of a gun who told bella that edward was dead? i think the government should check there facts before they send the info home to the families.

this song reminds me of a song by carrie underwood. i can't remember he name but the music video was about how her high school sweet heart had to go to the war and he ended up dieing. it sad. but i thought of that one song well i read.

did something like this happen to you? you wrote it so good that it almost seem's like it's from personal expeareince. i don't know if that's how you spell it. but yah, it seem's like it happened to you or maybe a friend. it's a really sad story and i brought tears to my eyes.

i really love your work so far and i will read and review the rest of your fan fic's.

this is... amazing

words cant describe it

its sad that you havent't gotten more reviews for it

u hardly find stories like this that are filled with such beautiful words and i hope u get more reviews

cuz this is a masterpiece

That was tragically beautiful.

Breathtakingly beautiful!

wow...this story is sad, but i like it. :)

Tears!:[