I like, alot! Especially the whole evil Bella part, she's usually written like the books, so sweet it makes you throw up a little. Can't wait for the rest. Will James have a different power that corresponds with hers or is he still a tracker?

That bitch! I'm really glad you decided to write this. I always thought Bella was evil, and a bunch of other crap. And I also like Alice and Edward as a pairing, but I love Jasper so I'd always think about him. Ooh. Who's Alice going to want to be with now? Please update soon. =)

this story is strangly interesting. i am fascinated with bella's character, oddly enough. i like the evil bella though. lol.

Nice...this Bella and James are perfect for each other!

It is fitting...you really like to whore James out don't you?

Well, imagining him as portrayed by Cam...it's easy to go down that road...m!

Well I'm back, and floored by this story!

You continually claim OOCs, but I angrily disagree. What makes this story so intriguing is the fact that Bella makes so much sense. Why would a woman who is so meek and helpless in her human form have such great mental abilities as a vampire? Why would she want to be with Edward, for in the first book she begs for independence until he completely controls her?
I think your interpretation of Bella is right on, and much more interesting than anything else Stephanie Meyer could have come up with, and anything on the fanfiction market.

That being said, I do have my customary criticisms. I think you lost Jasper in your effort to make Bella all powerful. The war strategist and intellectual that he is, the minute he was free of Bella's control he would have fought back (in my opinion.) In all of the books he seems so violence-happy. He has all this pent up rage and emotion, and the only way he gets it out is through violence, I think taking it out on Bella would be the perfect opportunity.

I have to say, the way you describe Edward, a lost little puppy looking for love, is beautifully accurate. I think it describes his original relationship with Bella. He's so quick to love something perceived as himself: quiet, innocent, intelligent, such as Bella or Alice. But loud provocative Rosalie he spurns.

Anyways, sorry for the extremely long review, I'm just ectastic for this story and the way it's going. Keep up the great work!!

Love,
B

I hate to say it, but... I almost want James to KILL Bella!!

Bella was smart not to mess with Jasper. He'd rip her head off without batting an eyelash, with everything she's done to him.

James + Bella = Awesome.

Bella's scares the shit out of me...

I love this Bella. And I hate her. A lot. But the most important thing of all is how much I love this fic. I have no idea how this is going to end... and I love that.

Edward and Alice...NICE! Although I know it just muddies the water for when Jasper gets free.

I'm really liking this!!

I didn't know how I'd feel about an Anti-Bella storyline at first - but I'm loving it! Keep writing!

Alice and Edward make me smile, because they are awesome. I love Edward in this chapter, being all cool and stuff.

The end of the chapter was omnious. Does that mean a certain someone is coming in the next chapter? *shifty eyes*

Gah ;~; wtheck, I can't read anymore than the first chapter cause' I'm already almost in tears..
*wipes eyes*
It was touching :] loved it. I'll read the rest for sure.

Wow. Just wow. I really like this fic, though the tenor is undoubtedly dark and stormy. I'm not a big Bella fan, and this is a really interesting and original take, I think, on her personality! Great job, write more soon!

Wow. So much heartache. It makes my Edward/Bella-shippin' heart ache!