Good, an Az/Cain. We need more of those! Um, I felt them being slightly OC and I'd say the dialogs lacks a bit of fluency, nothing that can't be improved ;) but it was an amusing story to read. Thanks for writing it. God this fandom meeds more Az/Cain!

Aw. Thats sweet. Odd, but sweet.

Nothing against the pairing and it's not badly written. But you don't give a sense of how long it has been since the Eclipse. I just don't see these two developing the flirty banter unless it's been a while--like a few annuals. It seems very soon into the aftermath, and it seems too soon for them to be this way with each other.

I was so excited when i saw a cain/az paring! I love these two together and wish more stories were about them. The Tin Man fanfiction is so over loaded with Cain/DG...it is nice to see something unusual.
Hope you write more with this paring! It is a really good story.
rebecca