That was a sweet story with a very nice plot line, good job.

Ha ha, I think I already reviewed this on DA... well, I'll say "Excellent job again!!"

I like this a lot, thank you!

Very sweet story. I love fics that explore the relationship b/t Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon and this one hit the spot perfectly! ^_^

Great job! That was wondefully written, especially this line: 'It had finally occurred to Qui-Gon why the Master’s had insisted all students be taken by individual teachers before they became teenagers; then, nobody at the Temple had to deal with the really hard questions of rapidly growing individuals. They could make the Padawan’s Masters come up with answers instead.'. I just... really like that line.

This made me want to stuggle up under a blanket. It was so cute! Very well written!

See how I move like lightning?

I adore this. Consider it ADORED. Cute little curious Obi-Wan, asking questions. And I'm such a sucker for Qui-Gon fluff. ^-^ Fantastical.