|Reviews for Beginnings|
| Butterfly877 8/23/09 . chapter 21
Thank you for this part!
We did wait a long time for it but it was worth it.
I like how Sarah is talking to Cody. She will help him being his old self again.
| Michelle 8/18/09 . chapter 21
I feel for you for the busy summer!
I love how things are going on this section!
And are you going to keep going with the "current" timeline? I think you still left a few things hanging that I was hoping to catch the end of... like with those hunters...
| prophet144 8/14/09 . chapter 21
Hey... liked the chapter but I caught a couple of errors...
May 8, 2003 and May 25, 2003
Thought you'd like to know.
| Butterfly877 7/18/09 . chapter 20
aw, poor Cody! YOu are doing good with discribing it all. I like that Cody and JEss have this deep connection with each other.I hope he isgetting better soon. I am excited to see when his wife and daughter come in.
keep on writing...
| Butterfly877 7/9/09 . chapter 19
Thank you so much for giving us the story about Cody's rescue and time after his war experience. I was waiting for that and it as worth it.
I really like what you made out of it and luckily we already know that Cody will be fine after all. I am excited to see how his future wife and little Ava come into the story.
Good job here! And keep writing I am going to read it!
| prophet144 7/2/09 . chapter 17
Good chapter. I would have liked a little more info on his injuries, unless you're going to include that in the next chapter or something.
| Butterfly877 6/27/09 . chapter 16
I so love your story!
Thanks for telling us about her try outs.
It was nice that she went to safe Matt. Why cant they just sit down and talk with each other? I so want to lock them in a room together for a week.
Hopefully you wont let us wait as long for the next part!
I especially liked the way Frank reacted out there and how Jim made sure she didnt have to leave.
Thanks and please post more!
| prophet144 6/27/09 . chapter 16
Talking about slipping through the crack... sheesh... how much lard did she use to grease up on that one?
LOL... liked this one... still want to read about Jess going in and rescuing Cody's butt
| Butterfly877 6/11/09 . chapter 14
Good thing she finally is back home. Now they just have to rescue Cody and then everything is fine.
I am excited to read about her training for the Ranger position. SO who is going to train her, Robin or Cutler?
| prophet144 6/10/09 . chapter 14
Liked this chapter... I can't wait to see how you're going to pull off getting Cody out... and you have to do a bit with how he's handling things when they get him back.. that should fill in the rest of the gaps til the first story you did.
| Butterfly877 6/6/09 . chapter 13
Thank you for writing another part of this. I really feel bad for Jess and its good to know that its all going to change for her in the future.
Cant wait to read more!
| Michelle 5/16/09 . chapter 11
OH- that last sentence... that's good!
| Butterfly877 5/16/09 . chapter 11
LOL the last sentence was the best!
I love the backstory of them!
Wonder when Matt asks her to come back home. Isnt that what she really wants?
JT is a nice guy, I like that you brought him into the story.
Dont let us wait too long again for more.
| prophet144 4/25/09 . chapter 10
I'm glad Jess and Cody patched things up. Looking forward to the next update.
| Butterfly877 4/16/09 . chapter 9
wow! the last scene with the injured woman in the hospital is so nice. Poor Jess! She feel like everybody is dumping her and nobody cares about her. She really had a hard time back then. Good to know she will be back with her brothers and everything will be fine.