Got me into DN. Very well written.

That was really sweet. I'm not sure if that's what you were going for with this, but I liked it a lot. Very well written, kudos to you. Personally, I absolutely adore a vulnerable Light. He's just so cold all the time that it's nice to see (well, imagine I suppose) him break down once and a while. And L being there to comfort him makes it that much better. If you ever get the time, I would appreciate more fics similar to this. But really, that's just me, don't feel any pressure if you're busy. Thanks so much for your story, I really enjoyed it! ^o^

Oh my god...
All that I can say is... I love you.
Seriously, this has to be one of, if not, THE best stories I have every read, and I don’t mean just fanfiction. I actually have tears in my eyes after reading this. You are such a great writer. My review cannot explain how much I love reading your stories.
I hope to see even more Death Note fics from you ((^.^))

This is great, I hope to see more Death Note fics from you in the future.

Wow, I think that you captured them perfectly, Light especially :D The idea is a good one you should carry it on but it works awesome as a one shot too! :D

I like the freshness of this idea and the fiction...Good job and well done on it!

so Light can only 'see' him when it's dark? but he can feel him..
(I'm also really wondering how he managed to do that, being dead and all..)
very moving and emotional, and even if you're new to the fandom, you still figured out what the most wanted pairing is.
(Lxlight, hah. we pwn you all!)

yes. thank you for writing this.
~bookenworum

This was great. I absolutely loved it!

It actually ended happier/or more hopeful than I thought it would. I'm glad.

If you ever get the inclination, I would love to read more!

At first I was smiling a little because of L missing the sweets. So typically him. But since then I've struggled with my tears because this was heartbreaking.

I'm so glad to see Light regretting the murder of L somewhere, at least.

that was depressingly sweet. imma have to go read a good crack fic just to get my mood back up, lol. i was practically sobbing!

So... so... so CUTE. AND SWEET. AND SAD. OMG. ;__;

I loved it. :) Good for your first Death Note fic, too. Kind of reminds me of my first Death Note fic, in a way, although that's near the end so you couldn't read it unless you're completely finished 'cause it's all spoilery. XD

Hope to see more Death Note fics from you in the future! :D

That was truely beautiful. It even made me cry, that my friend is a rare thing. I tip my hat to you.

I pride myself in being a fairly stoic person. I try my best not to wear my heart on my sleeve, it tends to save me from anymore heart break than is absolutley necessary. Unfortunatly I made the mistake of reading this wonderful fic on my free period at school. Here I am, a junior, black belt in Potuguese Street Fighting, able to kick the ** of everyone in my school, reduced to absolute tears in front of a school coimputer, in the middle of my library. Needless to say my reputation had suffered a disheartening blow, and it may take until graduation to build it back up, and it's all thanks to you.
And I do very much mean thank you. Not becasue of the cliche, you brought me to life, becasue you didn't. I was very much alive, before this, and remain so now. But thank you for publishing this wonderful fic. I can't tell you how happy I am to have come across such rare quality and respect for character.
In the books I was so upset that we didn't get to see much of the real Light Yagami. Even in the show and movie, we see only what he wants us to see. Which is the whole point of his character, if it can even be called that. You really seemed to capture him, the real him, in this fic.
You brought him down from an unusually stoic god to a normal humna who lost someone very dear to him. Granted, he came a bit out of character, but who can help that, right?
And you did wonderfully with Ryuzakki as well, I was very pleased. Even in death he was calculating and logical. Not unlike a Volcun. His thought process was very true to his character.
And I loved how you took thier relationship up a notch. I do thuroughly believe that if L had not died then he and Light would have had a romantic relationship, even if it was just to make the other lose his cool. And L really was very fond of Light. Not Kira, but Light. And Light was ver fong of Ryuzakki, not L. I was very happy to see this.
The only thing I would have liked to see more of was Ryuk, but only becasue he's my hubby. Also, I was not fond of that blatant act of violence commited against my Ryuk!
All and all I am now ruined for the rest of my school career becasue of your wonderful fic. Thank you so very much.

*sobs* That was so... great.

I like to believe they both go to the same place and are reunited in the after-life. Since as much as L fought for justice, that fight had to have come at a price. I know that he had to have done some things in the name of justice that aren't so great. So in a way they are even.

is it selfish of me to not want you to end this?
at all...pleasepleaseplease keep writing this.
its begging for more chapters.
i am.
please. :]