omg AWESOME! can't wait for your next update! i hated it when johnny died, but then at least he wouldn't be crippled for life... but, of course, he's still alive i love it!

Update or else lmao!

Update or I migh go insane

stupid. completely stupid. that's all i have to say

This is a great idea for a story

This needs some work. It should be a little longer and it's quite awkward.

Hm...


I can't really judge, because of only one small chapter such as this.. All in all, pretty good. I think that if Pony seriously thought he was dead, he must've benn humungi outta it though. He was, though, now that I think of it.I think it is a pretty good idea, since not many people seem to think of good ones anymore. Just Mary-sues, and gay fics.. I don't get into those. But this.. This is something. I'll look out for it. Update soon, so I CAN tell you what I think of the story.

poor johnny...

Aww this is really good but kinda sad :( You should write more!

Well it's a good idea, and you have Johnny's character down pretty good. But I just don't buy that Ponyboy would think Johnny's dead because he passed out. I mean yeah, Pony was a little out of it, but even then I'm pretty sure he is smart enough to recognize Johnny didn't die.

Mo

Great start so far. Can't wait till you update!

I'm really glad johnny is alive in this one