So I sorta kinda really love this story. :)

It's not too short and not too long... Your grammar is really good... And I'm especially glad that it's not another one of those El/Sands stories. :P

I seriously think you should write a sequel to it.

Thanks for writing a story that was worth taking the time to read!

-Laira

Well this doesn't make Sands a helpless... Great fic love it!\

Please write more like such.

I'm happy it ended well.

great . update soon.

Great write more.

Let me it our crazy loco agentt Sands she's meeting?:)Write more.

don't let him get into trouble...

Yes yes please update.

Thank you for making Sadie tell him of Barillo's daughter.

I hope the girldoes something so that Sands canavoid his tragic fate,he caused by his dirty deeds.

Good really reading the next chapter.