Zomg, the whole story is written amazingly, and the fact that he main character and I have the same name makes it so much better!

wow! this is really good! i take i tthis is based on the PS2 Game of it? it sounds like it is. Good job, i suppose you lost interest in it now but it would be REAALLYYYYY good if you could update. I havnt seen poor old Neko Zombie yet! or Catherine! in your next chapter, could you make sure they are in it? thanks

Keep up the good work :P

Dogs2me

Nice story so far, keep up the good work :P

Dogs2me

Not bad, a little rushed, but not painfully so. You have potential, and seeing as how the game (as I can assume you're basing this fic off of) itself was a little rushed, try adding something to it. You're doing a good job so far! -

Lotus