That was sad. But very beautiful.
I liked it.

Hmmn, this can have very different meanings... Atleast in my book... Very interesting concept. Liked it very much :). Even more than some storys...

GO FRAKKIN' DAMMIT!

I read this because it looked like the kind of thing that ended happily.

I find it to be this sweet little ode to NaruHana ending with the death of NAruto tragically!

IT WAS SO GOOD BUT TOO GOD FRAKKING TRAGIC!

PLEASE DO A FULL FIC WITH A HAPPY ENDING!1

PS: I really liked it except the end so please don't take this as a bash or flame.

awsome.

Interesting one-shot...like how many of the sentences gave a short teaser to the larger untold storyline of the story. My only question is WHEN Naruto died. Because you made it seem like he was successful in killing the Akatsuki...especially the 'monster' sentence. So did he died afterwards from some fatal wound while fighting them or what?