I have an account but they won't let me log in right now...but still! I love this story!! you have to update, what's gonna happen to Tifa? What the hell is Cloud gonna do when he finds out what happened to Tifa?

Shiny, I was thanked. Of everyone I've messaged you're only the second to actually do that. I appreciate the kindness.
This is definitely a great story, but oh the mixed emotions. I want Tifa and company to win, but Sephiel and gang are a tight knit group too, acting as family and wanting peace and all. If they weren't sided with Jenova, you put enough emotion in them that it might actually be hard to decide between the two opposing groups. Can't wait for the next chap :)

ah the power of love .. nice

I just read all twenty chapters of this in one sitting 0_o my brain is mush...

But I have decided that I absolutely LOVE this. One, everyone is in character. Two, the story is very well written! (well, except for typos I spot now and then, but they aren't bad)

I admit I am rather lost with all the, um, remnants? The others that were part of Project J? Nevermind, I'll differentiate them in time. Though Raphiel sounds interesting. I want to know more about someone who has so much loyalty from others that they would die for him >.<

I absolutely love the TifaxSephiroth in this story XD This pairing doesn't show up that much, and you pull it off beautifully. Too bad Genesis was there a few chapters back...

Okay! I wish you luck in your next chapter, and can hardly wait!

I'm really excited to see a new chapter out! As usual, it was a really good one. I noticed a couple minor things.

"Before he could demand that she not overestimate her opponent," I think that overestimate should be underestimate, since Jezbel doesn't think much of Cid.

"Eager to finish what he’d started in Tifa’s bar, he unsheathed his saber –the sound the opening violin of the performance to come-- and grinned as he zeroed on his unsuspecting preys." You can take off the "s" at the end of "preys." I do like the metaphor about the violin, very creative.

Otherwise, I'm really curious to see what becomes of Tifa. The descriptions of what Sephiroth is going through in his mind is very well written. These types of scenes always have the potential of becoming very confusing, but you've avoided that and made it easy to read and understand what's going on.

Your description of Sephiel's thoughts as he's flying toward Sephiroth and Tifa is really, really good. His motivations are clearly spelled out, why he's doing it, how he feels, his doubts, even when he's stopped by Sepiroth...this whole scene works well.

Excellent job with this chapter! Looking forward to the next one :)

Ah! You updated finally--and here I was thinking you had forgotten this story. Silly me.

There is nothing so powerful as fighting for the people you care for the most. As cheesy as it sounds the power of love is an incredible motivator. I can't see Sephiroth being half so determined to win a fight for Shinra as he would for Tifa and you depicted this so well in this chapter!

Because of this I was a little dissapointed that he didn't actually even strike Jenova. Though Jenova could easily bring up his doubts and insecurities (and that would be her most potent weapon against him) she shouldn't be able to do it so fast that he's not able to get at least one strike in. I was hoping for some sort of fight between the two before Tifa yanks Jenova out.

Speaking of which how is Tifa able to yank Jenova out, did the blood congeal into something solid?

"...the idea of becoming a moving carcass what iced his blood," What should be replaced with "that" otherwise a good metaphor!

Again I loved your characterization of "the bad guys." Sephiel has almost as much of my sympathy as Sephiroth (and won't this be an interesting upcoming fight ;)

I hope your next update will be soon! Sephiroth and Sephiel are about to fight again (my money is on Sephiroth) Tifa's unconcious with Jenova inside her. Uriel is trying to reach his brother in time...cliffys galore here--don't leave your loyal readers hanging ;)

Oh, well done! What a great chapter. You kept it tight and moving along, but with the right touches of emotion on all character sides to keep me totally connected.
So worth the wait...hope it won't be as long until the next one but if it is, well, obviously your fans are waiting!!

Awsome, Tifa kicked but in this chapter!

Oh damn girl...nice update!

I love the mental battle of Sephiroth, Tifa and Jenova. And Sephiroth having his light/strength from his angel.

And Cid... all I can say is <3!

And again, you wrote Genesis very nicely. And I love how you put that he was just as protective of Tifa as Sephy.

Love the pov from the bad guys, I always like when people have this, makes the villains more deep and not just...oh I wanna kill everything just because!

Again very nice update and well worth the wait! Can't wait for the next chap :) Till then good luck with life and school, take it easy and remember...always have fun and relax here and there!


Ta-ta-ta~

Yay! At long last another update! It was well worth waiting for! Made my day, you did! I loved the interaction with Tifa against Jenova, as well as Genesis being just as protective over Tifa as Sephiroth and Cid are! I just love it! And the enemies, though I feel sorry for them...being under Jenova's thumb and all, were great! Just simply fabby! Now don't you worry about the long waits for updates. I, much like others I'm sure, are quite understanding as to why it takes so long. You have a life, one that is quite busy at the moment...and we can't be selfish no matter how much we want to be. ;) I hope everything is going well for you. Be sure to take care, stay happy as well as safe. Until next time! -Ghedea

Thank you for this fantastic story! I love the scenes between Seph and Teef. So please more.
At first I thought "oh no not genesis again", but now I must say, how you characterized him is really great, his comments to Seph are so cool. I'm also looking forward to the point, when Seph and Cloud finally meet, this will be fun... So please update, you are doing very well.

AWESOME .. the best Tife/Seph so far I read .. PLEASE update

Please uppdate!
your driving me crazy :)

It's really good and I can't wait to read more!

Ok, this is the first SephxTifa story I've read, and I don't think I could've picked better!! You HAVE to update or I'm going to go nuts D: