 Command76 2009-12-09 . chapter 11Sephiroth's pretty good with the ladies...I'm taking down notes while reading the chapter...
But then again he's good at just about everything else right..? ..LOL
This Tifa Sephiroth relationship is really growing on me, I'm feeling so anxious for them to succumb to their past and engage in a true-relationship...They seem perfect for each other :)... |
 .o0XxGurenxX0o. 2009-12-09 . chapter 20I love your way of writing this story, the way you developed every character is amazing!~ Keep up the good work!
Waiting for another amazing update ^-^
~~Guren |
 Command76 2009-12-08 . chapter 10Yeah! I read the footnote on the bottom, I can't wait to see Cloud again.
Amazing chapter, these remnants are pretty tough. Its kind of cool and scary at the same time. Glad Nanaki made in appearance, he's awesome!
Keep the cure spell going because we all need a little healing! |
 Command76 2009-12-07 . chapter 9Another great chapter. The SephxTifa pairing is admirable and I'm falling in love with their awkward affection towards one another. The story is really starting to pick up and is catching my attention to a whole other level which is welcome.
I'm getting more and more interested to find out exactly what is going on, and why Tifa is the center of all the strange things happening.
Again amazing story telling, it really is an attention grabber. |
 Command76 2009-12-07 . chapter 8I love how you tweaked Final Fantasy VII history and taking Genesis back to his roots. This would have to be my favorite chapter thus far, because it deepens the plot so much by introducing multiple characters. Now I can finally see my favorite character Cloud, and know that he has a journey of his own to undertake.
I really love your approach with Genesis though, everything seems precious and valuable to him. And I also love the conspicuous quoting of loveless.
Again, fantastic work and amazing storytelling. |
 Command76 2009-12-07 . chapter 7Boy o' Boy, looks like Sephiroth's in big trouble now...Hope he can find a way out of it. And I'm glad Tifa is willingly allowing herself to receive Sephiroth's assistance. It must be really tough for her to do that...
Really love how you decribe their emotions and how they feel about certain situations. Keep up the good work. |
 staceums 2009-12-06 . chapter 4I must confess, I'm not a FFVII fan (*gasp! Blasphemy!*) but I couldn't help but feel sorry for Sephiroth after playing Crisis Core. And I just can't stand Cloud's emo **.
But this is very interesting. I just sort of stumbled upon your story and now I'm hooked. Very good writing; especially the way you write Tifa and Sephiroth's personalities. Keep it up! |
 ataveras824@hotmail.com 2009-12-06 . chapter 7 Amazing story. It keeps getting more and more interesting as it progresses. I must admit, you present Sephiroth in a whole new light, reminds me of Crisis Core and his hero days in SOLDIER. He gets a shot at redemption and to become a hero once again which is a nice treat.
I love this passage, its a the great chronology of Sephiroths many careers through life.
"Sehiroth Crescent… the perfect experiment.
The perfect pupil.
The perfect SOLDIER.
The perfect hero.
The perfect… monster."
Or should he change the title to ‘a weak and pathetic puppet’? |
 Command76 2009-12-05 . chapter 6O my God! That is not what I was expecting at all... The change of pace is completely unexpected and quite frankly more than welcome.
I'm really enjoying reading this! |
 Command76 2009-12-05 . chapter 4Amazing work, great storytelling, has a mysterious and arcane feeling atmosphere and keeps me wanting more...Love it.! |
 Command76 2009-12-05 . chapter 5Amazing! Its so engaging and insightful, I can't wait to read the next chapter... I've been waiting a long time for this encounter and I have not been disappointed... |
 Houkaru Kisaragi 2009-12-02 . chapter 20this story is excellent. Keep up the good work though i'm surprised with the writing style that I rarely come across... |
 Courage-Red Twilight 2009-11-26 . chapter 20Awesome story! It's a perfect concoction of romance, angst, comedy, and awe! Please, please, PLEASE don't stop! I wanna read more! |
 Courage-Red Twilight 2009-11-25 . chapter 1O_o Cool... |
 brokenmaelstrom 2009-11-23 . chapter 20Oh my god your writing is so goddamn wonderful. I was shaking my laptop in frustration when I found that I had finished reading all of the available chapters!
I really enjoy your Sephiroth and his relationship with Tifa, and honestly whenever they're kissing each other I'm hoping that they'll just jump each other and get at it =P I'm also looking forward to the Cloud/Sephiroth reunion, and I don't know if it was your intention or not, but I'm quite averse to your Cloud. On the other hand I love the rest of the characters, especially Tifa, Sephiroth, Rie, Genesis, Vincent and Cid.
OH, is there any chance of Zack showing up? *isadie-hardZackfan*
Thanks for shaing! I can't wait for more! |