Well you could have wrote what she saw ;)

lol good one... gives me a good feeling when i think that you`d write more... DO write more, kay?

Excellent! You know, you've written some of the best Cassie/Nick stories I've ever read!
Keep up the amazing work!

this was really good. :) i love the pairing and you executed it very well. keep up the great work!

Very cute, i liked it :)
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"with a passion" Haha. Sorry. I disagree, it was not a fail. It was awesome. I really liked the ending. Peace :]
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Tempe

I really like it! i love the chemistry between cassie and nick. and i like how you wrote 2 stories from each poin of view.

I wanted more. Keep up the great work. I loved how Nick carried her out the bar. I also was very happy that it was him in the dream with her. :)

Oaw! Come on!! lol NO lemon? lol I STILL LOVED IT! =]

Love. Love. LOVE it! Cassie and Nick were PERFECTLY in character. This is the best one I've read so far! And unlike the other ones, this isn't even creepy! Great job! ;)

-zeurin

I hated the ending a bit, too. :(
You have to write a sequal to this! Gah, you just left us hanging!

wahh write more cassie and nick stories so love this characters...

It's REALLY good! You have Cassie right on. I loved the part where smoking is her only outlet although Nick would go berserk if he knew. I can totally see it :)

Great tension building. Great depiction of how they're turning around each other without really knowing what's going on. And the ending is good too, even though I would've loved more lime in my drink ;) But it's really good, don't worry about the ending.

Wish you all the best!

Jube

the end was a complete win! if this is what you come up with brain dead than i shudder to think what you might produce fully alert so i beg you to please write more for this fandom. these two are just so hot together.

Loved it! Cassie & Nick are great together!