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Shadows-of-Realm
2009-11-28 . chapter 7
Hey!

Great story so far. I'm loving the action. I would think Neville would have broken down by now but he's stronger than he looks. Great set of stories so far! I really can't wait for more! Please UPDATE SOON!
Fon-chan
2009-11-20 . chapter 7
THIS IS GREAT!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!DAYDverse ROX!
kreacherthemighty
2009-11-14 . chapter 7
thanfiction you are very talented but your talent will diminish if you don't continue with this... i'm just getting into it and it wud be a shame if i had to release the runespoors, i've fed them on weetabix for months... i think they're missing the taste of blood! lol

seriously chap, all joking aside plz,plz,plz with a thestral on top continue
tomoyohime8
2009-10-28 . chapter 5
i'm sort of trying to figure out how Justin could be in Eton, when he was in Hogwarts during that period...

but Neville and his mum made me tear up with joy.
amazingtofu
2009-10-27 . chapter 7
i don't know what you have planned for the rest of this or not, but i can't wait to see neville and malfoy... malfoy is one of my favorite characters so it might be biased a bit when i say it would be cool if he turned out to help them solve the case in his own malfoy-ish cocky sort of way
like he could turn out to be a good ally because he doesn't want to underestimate neville again, he's protecting his family, and he really wants neville to put in a good word
either way, i love everything you've written because its so plausible, realistic, and just works perfectly
i really like the whole problem with either bringing the worlds together or seperating them because it isn't a right or wrong situation its something with so many variables that it's realistic and fascinating
DerangedxandxSarcastic
2009-10-13 . chapter 7
Oh my gos, I actually have to wait for a chapter in one of your stories, how uncool. Anyways I very much so look forwards to the update, the chapter was as wonderful as ever. Brilliant job on Neville's explosion, and very well done everything in the Auror department, very well done. Great job, I love it!
DerangedxandxSarcastic
2009-10-13 . chapter 6
What? But, no! I refuse to believe that Justin would do anything to harm her or their kids! No matter what... Right? That would be so mean, no way can you kill of the Longbottoms just as they find a "cure" and then turn around and have some huge backstabbing assface in the DA survivors...
DerangedxandxSarcastic
2009-10-13 . chapter 5
Oh my gosh, that is so incredibly wonderful, I'm so very very impressed. Brilliant job, oh my gosh that is so sweet, I can only hope that that really does happen like that.
DerangedxandxSarcastic
2009-10-13 . chapter 4
Wonderful chapter, as ever, I really like how well you can do Malfoy's persona. Because personally I picture him just like that, great job.
DerangedxandxSarcastic
2009-10-09 . chapter 3
Oh my gosh, what? I didn't think that was possible! I just sort of figured she was immortal...
But yay my gosh Harry, It's terrible that it took you this long but you finally will be able to move o to be the man you should be in all ways shapes and forms.
Brilliant chapter.
DerangedxandxSarcastic
2009-10-08 . chapter 2
Oh my my my, poor both these boys and Neville struck broke when he's a hero many times over? Now that just seems wrong...
DerangedxandxSarcastic
2009-10-08 . chapter 1
Oh yay! Another thing which so kindly involves the wonderfulness' that are Terry and Mike!! Brilliant first chapter.
Greensl33ves
2009-10-07 . chapter 7
I hope you continue soon! I really love your stories and this one is developing so interestingly. Please continue soon!
quafflelicious
2009-10-04 . chapter 7
zomg! i love it! i just hope it won't tear up my heart as much as sluagh did. have you ever thought about becoming a full time writer? because this trilogy has me hooked.

so much that i should be doing calculus right now, but i had to finish this chapter. at least now i have to wait for the next. hopefully not too long, *nudge nudge*.

ah well.

one thing though, in DAYD (the original), your portrayal of snape was a bit off, in my humble opinion. i don't think he would have been as cruel.
Danwea
2009-08-23 . chapter 7
You have no idea how happy I was to see you've updated!
Yet another awesome chapter, I can't wait to find out what's behind all this.
Please update soon!
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