 DeltaBladeX 2009-11-13 . chapter 1I liked this. If it ever gets continued beyond this oneshot, I'll be happy. |
 mountainelements 2009-05-19 . chapter 1It's too bad that this is only a one-shot. If you're afraid you won't finish a longer story, maybe you could just not post the longer story until you've written it all? |
 Ranmakim74 2009-04-23 . chapter 1Fascinating story. looking foword to the next chapter. |
 Darkforce222 2009-04-07 . chapter 1Really, really enjoyable. Hope to see more of this universe. |
 link2143 2009-04-04 . chapter 1Cool crossover. It works quite well. |
 ariel stormcloud 2009-03-26 . chapter 1great story |
 Jumper Prime 2009-03-25 . chapter 1Found this through your post on TFF and am very glad I took the time to do so. This story is awesome and I'm looking forward to more. Now I'm gonna thoroughly reread the post that got me here with a new understanding. I look forward to more. |
 The Unicorn 2009-03-24 . chapter 1Interesting start, looking forward to seeing where you go with this. I hope you manage to create a belivable Naruto-taught-by-Ranma who isn't ridiculously over powered althoughI can't see how. |
 ChronoMaster 2009-03-18 . chapter 1Hey this is one of the better stories I've read recently, I look foward to an update, also I nottice that you have no mis-spellongs as well as no grammer errors (punctuations, missing camas, ect.)that I've noticed and I can usually spot a few in works.Story idea's new and the story itself is great to read. I hope you continue. ^.^ |
 zmz1999 2009-03-16 . chapter 1Interesting start. Battle was over the top for an introduction. It's never interesting when the opponents are so totally outclassed.
Story has a lot of potential. It'll be interesting to see where you take it. |
 Sironblood1 2009-03-13 . chapter 1this is a interesting concept hope to see more soon!! |
 Bobboky 2009-03-11 . chapter 1cool |
 Aikori Shukrai 2009-03-10 . chapter 1This is really interesting. I would definitely like to read more. |
 justanotherguyathiscomputer 2009-03-10 . chapter 1...Please continue this. It is so hard to find a readable Naruto story. Especially one with my favorite pairing. This was great. It had comedy, some drama, action, and its a Naruto-Tayuya pairing...what more can I ask for...well other than for you to continue this. Well...later.
-justanotherguyathiscomputer |