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Alex
2009-10-25 . chapter 1
OMIGOD! You have to continue this! Please, please, please, please, please!
kissn'envy
2009-06-05 . chapter 1
ohmigod this story is sad!
But at the same time it is really good.
I feel sorry for Sakura, she belongs with Sasuke, but who would want to be with him now?

T_T*crys*
If i was in Sakuras shoes, i would probabaly do the same thing but i would probably have a little more hatred in me.

Hey hey, do you think you could right another story like a sequel for this one?

I wanna find out whats happenes in for days!!
(even if there wasn't suppose to be anything)
I'm curious as to what it could end up like.

Send me info if you think about ne?

Great job, keep it up!!
pockybandits89
2009-05-15 . chapter 1
oh! that was so beautiful!
Great job they're all in character
It is kinda sad but its very hopeful
XxriotxX
2009-03-23 . chapter 1
that was pretty good.
Lover of Stories 24
2009-03-20 . chapter 1
Team 7 angst is food for the soul. xD Or at least for the rabid fan. ^^; This was a nice piece, and I like how you showed the tensions between the three. Keep writing~
Twinneh, with your FULL review
2009-03-15 . chapter 1
TWINNEH! :D I
BlueGreenApples
2009-03-15 . chapter 1
TWINNEH! :D I
KaT stah
2009-03-14 . chapter 1
aw.. that story really got to me, maybe because I was listening to a sad song while reading it. Haha.. but yeah.. I really love your writing style! It's so descriptive and the way you write Sasuke, Sakura and Naruto is so believable! Especially Sasuke! I always hope that you'd add onto your one-shots cos they're so good and addictive! haha..
anywayz...
Great Job! Love your stories!
~kat
sonia
2009-03-13 . chapter 1
You are really great writer... ending is kinda a cliffy but good. It just that you keep me wanna know what they need to know when Sasuke told them to meet up again in 4 days... I vote for a sequel, really!
BTW, when will you update your other great story I am following-"Something Tangible"- waiting patiently (yah! sure), been a while since you update- do update soon, please!
Thank you.
.EverLastingFun.
2009-03-12 . chapter 1
owah~
very nice one-shot.
love the ending especially.
if you continued you would spoil the superr nice end.
although i still wish fo ryou to continue!!
*having mixed feelings*
:D
Chantrea Moonbeam
2009-03-11 . chapter 1
So sad...yet so beautifully written. Why do you always have to write such wonderful stories, then we realize it's all over and you leave us all hanging? (sigh) Maybe it's because you are really making us ask again why we love Sasusaku.
I hope you win the contest and I'm looking forward to more stories.
smos
2009-03-11 . chapter 1
I know this is a oneshot and everything but maybe, just maybe you could have a sequel? I mean you can make a whole multichaptered story this is! IT'S AWESOME!
Paige O.o
2009-03-10 . chapter 1
I really liked this. Normally I don't go for the ambiguous and open ended stories just because I feel we get enough of that in the manga, lawl xD but it was very hopeful and beautifully written I find myself liking it more and more. What I love the most is Sasuke and Sakura didn't say one word to each other and yet you can just feel the silent conversation that was going on between them, which is so much like there relationship. It made me smile. :D Beautiful job!
JustALittleTwisted
2009-03-10 . chapter 1
Dang, I wish this wasn't a oneshot. I'd like to see what Sasuke had to say. Also, can you put a link to the contest site so I can vote and see other entries?
drgn
2009-03-10 . chapter 1
That was beautiful yet sad at the same time. It leaves me craving for more.
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