 Pink Wolf Princess 2009-11-09 . chapter 1Yeah... Alice & Eric were cute together. Not in a romantic way, more dad/daughter. I wish there were more Alice/Eric fanfics. It's something few look into, isn't it? Including me... my mistake. |
 LongAgo13 2009-09-22 . chapter 1You're a brilliant author! You've made me like a character that was barely shown in the show. It takes skill to do that. Favorite! |
 PurpleRanger101 2009-09-20 . chapter 1This was so super cute! You pinned Eric down well and showed a more human side! Great job! |
 taylorearhardtmyers 2009-08-31 . chapter 1story is really good but eric should'nt ignore taylor for this little kid |
 cmar 2009-06-01 . chapter 1Very sweet - I love that this brings out Eric's softer side without ever being mushy and staying very true to his prickly personality. Loved the series of little vignettes, including the sniping with Taylor and Wes's teasing. Wonderful last lines, too. |
 Sharmaine 2009-05-24 . chapter 1 Reading this AGAIN on the way to work on a Monday morning. Can't help it, I find this story so touching & it's gonna put me in a great mood today. Had to review again to let you know how much I love it! Plus it helped me find project! |
 Stumble 2009-04-18 . chapter 1LOVED THIS! It was so cute. I agree, Eric's interaction with Alice is just adorable! I love how it shined through here. Found you through my first reading of the Spandex Report, btw! I sure hope you get more traffic, thank you so much for sharing this pretty story! |
 tptigger 2009-03-15 . chapter 1Aw. This is so sweet. And so very Eric--he won't admit it, but she's got him wrapped around her little finger. (That little girl...) I love it! |
 Daine 2009-03-11 . chapter 1I *loved* this. Eric's voice was just right, and his interactions with Alice were beautifully done. Great concept, and a wonderful fic. |
 project314 2009-03-11 . chapter 1So, you know what the lamest thing about a story like this is? Being a oneshot, it just slips off the first page of new/updated PR stories and vanishes into obscurity way too fast. At least, when a story has more than one chapter, there's always a chance someone new will see it when it gets an update.
Seriously though, I really loved this. You put so much thought in all the little snapshots, scenes, the interactions. It was a really different side to Eric that I wish we could have seen more of on the show.
I'd go into more detail about what I enjoyed, but then I might as well paste the whole story here. The scene with Taylor was priceless, just like the line from Wes about not using the throwing stars on the cadets.
I'm really glad I landed on this. An hour later, and I probably would have missed it. Sweet, heartfelt, refreshing.
Thanks for writing it! And I look forward to reading more from you. =) |
 PhinalPhantasy 2009-03-11 . chapter 1This was a very nice and cute story. I hope that Taylor and Alice'll learn to get along lol. |
 JuseaPeterson 2009-03-10 . chapter 1This was so adorable. I love how you showed the relationship between Eric and Alice, I loved the bond they had and I think you did a really great job of showing it.
I like how you added in Taylor and Wes and the reaction to and from Alice.
Alice and Eric have a great bond and I think you captured it perfectly. |
 Dannie Tomlinson 2009-03-10 . chapter 1Wonderful fic. Loved it. |
 BloomingViolets 2009-03-10 . chapter 1Wow! It's been awhile since I've read a PR fic but this one definitely caught my attention! I thought you portrayed the Eric/Alice relationship nicely - they were definitely in character and yet, their interactions still melted my heart. Great job! |