New York University, where you say Sarah is going to school, is in downtown New York City. Then you say she and the other girls are going to a small upstate college. Which is it?

I noticed that you wrote in this chapter that Hattie disapproves of smoking...and yet near the start of the story, you had her smoking a cigarette with the use of a long cigarette holder...

hahah wonderful!

hahahaha wonderful! ...and now i really must be off to bed...
this didnt post last night

anyways lovely story... thoroughly enjoyed it!

hahaha I knew it! jareth you are a fooool sometimes... but isnt every man?

"We have to save them," Beau fretted, "I have to tell her I love her…"

Jareth felt a hand grip his heart, he looked at his Godson, speechless for a moment. "I promise you… you'll be able to tell her."

actually I think it be much more fitting if Beau meant Lizzie

oooooh Jolene doesnt have the most current intel of Gyles plans... this is gonna be tricky
will Jareth believe she betrayed him... or maybe she is indeed... maybe she indeed know Gyles plans the sacrifice to be at Jareth's own plantation.

Beau you maybe a match and catch beyond the dreams of normal womenkin... but... you better still not be playing at stealin a fish out of the paws of Tonton... he wont bear that!

ooooooooooooooooooo hehehehe wonderful!
and what power!

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I get the feelin Jingle likes Squee
the same way Jareth like Sarah

hehehe goblins with wings... now where have I see that!

Jareth
Beau
Jingle
Sarah

Tatie

Gyles & Jolene

this is how I see the power flow... Tatie being neuter/ or balance point

Gyles really is a git...

I have a morbid desire to know what was 'The image of the carcass that had been nailed to the door of the Sanctuary building would remain with him for a very long time to come. Whatever it was, it had suffered horribly. The stench of death and decay caused the law man to continue retching.' ... what species it was... I have a horrid feeling it was a goblin...