Why are all of your stories so sad? ç_ç

Unfortunately there are a lot of people like the trainers you write about, and that makes me really sad...

How can a trainer just pretend to be friend with his/her pkmn just to make it evolved?

But...it was a great story...it really was.

And...one of my favourite pre-evolutions is Pichu indeed xD

That must have really hurt when pikachu-well, used to be pichu-saw the trainer with her new pokemon, but at least he can live happily without doing things for no purpose, right? Great story!

...Why'd everyone write the shock off as "going crazy after evolution" if they were around to hear everything she said? Were they really that dense, or is it just denial?

Hey..For starters my name is pronounced Ceychoa-CHOA,not ,I have a pokemon and Ralts..I know I
know,odd couple,but..
Prologe
A Raichu writes a note.
'Dear Sopphie,
It is to my greatest sorrow to say that I must help in the rebelion against the So-houtie government.I might not make it
everything...I just what you to know,I'm doing this
for your I love you and I don't want you ,once again..Good-'
A Pachirisu walked though the doorway.
"Rikky?I-I want to tell you something."She said hiding something behind her tail(which wasn't too ).
"What is it Sopphie?"Rikky asked turning to her.
"Well,how's the sound of little feet pitter-pattering across the floor sound?"(Uh-oh,the "I'm pregnant" thing.)
"Um...W-Well.."He animia sweatdroped."I-I never th-thought about it.."'Pit,pat,pit,pit,pat'"P-pretty good."
"That's great!Considering.."She stepped to the side, revealling a pichu egg."I laid this just this morning."
"..."Rikky's eye twitched."...Err.."He grinned harshly.
"Th-That's gr-great,Sopph..Huuh."THUD!Rikky fainted.
"Oh,Rikky.."Sopphie patted his head.
Chapter 1:Images
"Huff,huff,huff..Come on!I said sorry!"A pichu with blue eyes
panted.
'Hide,gotta hide.'He thought.
A small cave hidden between the trees came into sight.
'That's it!'
"...volt tackle.."He whispered.
Suddenly,sparks surronded him,then it turned into lightning.
He sped into the cave without his predators seeing.
"Where is he?"A houndoom sniffed the air."I smell him."
'Oh,no!Leave,leave,just leave!'He pleaded in his mind.
"Come on,Flame,he's not wroth it."A Charmander said.
"But..What that little...We can't just-"Flame babbled.
"He stole,what we stole from him,a rare Lucario Spike,we deserved that."He said walking way.
"Yeah.."Soon both were gone and the pichu crawled out the cave and ran the other way.
Meanwhile,in a stone house covered in vines..
"Hello?"A ralts with violet eyes said."I'm home."
Silence.
"Damnit..Alone again.."She ran outside."I'll just get some company."
Back with the pichu,a few hours later...
It started to rain,hard.
"Aw,man..I need somewhere to stay the night."He came up to a fork in the road."This way four hours of hiking,and that way..
Is something.."
An image of a bleeding ralts shot though his mind.
'..S-Somebody help..Anyone..'It said.
"Oh,no!"He ran down that path."I've got to help!"
An image of the same ralts clawing down the path he was on.
The pichu looked down,a dried up blood trail.
"Geuss I should follow this."He said.
"Yes,follow it."The ralts from before whispered.
She ran ahead.
"Huh?A ralts..Wait.."He ran faster.
Chapter 2:Why?
"He'll be at my house in no-Oof!"She ran into a pichu with blue eyes.
"WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU?"He yelled angrily.
"Uhh.."She said.
"WHERE WERE YOU TAKING ME?"He shouted.
"I..um..I.."She babbled.
"ANSWER ME,NOW!OR I'LL BE FORCED TO HURT YOU!"His fist glowing.
"...Iron fist.."She whispered.
"TEN..NINE..EIGHT..SEVEN.."
She started sobbing like hell was after her.
"I'm sorry!*snivle*I-I'm so sorry!*sobs*I just wanted *snivle*some company...But I'm too shy to meet pokemon."
"..I-I.."The pichu looked down.
'Damnit.I made her cry..'
He knelt down and wrapped his arms around stayed like that 'till the ralts stopped crying.
"I'm sorry..It's just..I'm under A LOT of stress..I didn't mean to snap at you like that..Ah-Ah-Ahchoo!Bless me.."The pichu said.
(It's still pouring.)
"Would you like to come stay with me tonight,it's warm and I've got food."She said.
"...Um..Sure,why not?"He said."Oh,and I'm are you?"Anders said.
"I'm Sky."She said."Now,come on.I know a shortcut."
Chapter 3:Sky's house
Sky was making a tomato and chesto berry was making a fire in the fireplace.
"Hey,Anders."Sky called."The soup's done."
"Alright."He walked into the dinning room,a table for three.
He took a seat and a bowl floated infront of him.
"Whoa!"He said.
"Don't worry it's psychic powers."Sky said as she sat next to
him and ate some of her soup.
Anders followed.
'A tad bit spicy,a little bitter,with a light sweet taste,and
...Something else..'
"Love."Sky said.
"What?"Anders asked.
"That 'something else' is love,if you take your time stirring
it,cook it slowly,you'll get that taste."She said eating some
more of the soup.
"Oh."He blinked."Wait,how'd you.."
"I can read minds."
"Oh.."
Soon,they were finished and tired.
"So,where do I sleep?"Anders asked.
"Oh..In my room."Sky mumbled.
"..Okay.."
They walked down the hall and went into the room on the left.
Sky just crawled under the covers,Anders just laid ontop of them and drifted asleep.
The next morning,Sky woke up and saw a blue box with a white
ribbon tied on it.
'A Sky Gift..'She read the card on it
'Dear Sky,
Thank you for the help.
I wanted to give you something.
Don't worry,I'm in the living room.
Oh,and you suck you thumb in your sleep.
It's so cute,you look so inocent.
Anyway,hope you like it.
Love,
Anders'
"Love?...Eh?"Sky opened the box and gasped.
Inside was a dark purple braclet with five tiny shining everstones."Wow..."
She put it on,got out of bed,washed her face,and went into the living was sitting on the couch.
" ,I just want you to know that I'm leaving for Everlast Central to try to become president."He said.
"WHAT?..."'Relax,relax,Sky.'"C-Can I come?"
He blinked a me."...Yeah,why not?"
"Yay!"Sky lunged at him and hugged him tightly.
"So we'll leave right now,then."Anders said.
Sky let him go."Yeah."
Chapter 4:Rest stop
Four hours of hiking,they made it to Velvert 't let
the name fool you,it just a the left,a motel,a jail house,a few the right,a strip clud(Anders:*twitch*),a court,a few more houses,and a bar.
"You hungry?"Anders asked.
"You made me skip breakfast AND made me hiking for FOUR HOURS..Yes,I am hungry."Sky said.
"Would you eat at that bar?"Anders asked.
"Yeah,why not?"Sky asked.
They walked into the six pokemon in there.A familiar Arbok with a nasty scar down his mouth snarled at Anders.
-Anders' POV-
We sat at a waitress,a Smoochum,came over.
"What can I get you sweetie?"She asked.
"Um..I'll have a sandwitch."Sky said."And Oran Berry juice."
"Alrighty,how 'bout you?"
"Same as her."I said.
That Arbok was still starring at me.
The waitress came back with a tray.
The food smelled great.I took a bite of my mouth
burned,like was on fire.
"Ah,that's hot!"I yelled.
"Well,duh."She picked up the top peice of bread."It's called
Tomato berries and hot sauce."She put it back.
I laughed at my own stupidity,soon,Sky,the waitress,a aipom playing the piano,a banette sweeping the floor,the blaziken that made the sandwitch,and the female nidoran laughed along.
"R...THAT'S IT!"We all stopped and looked at the Arbok."I
CAN'T TAKE IT ANY LONGER!ICE FANG!"He lunged at me,fangs glowing shunk into my shoulder,I felt a chill
go up my veins.
"..Err..Iron Fist!"I swiftly jabbed my fist into his jaw.
He let go and I started punching like crazy,and I didn't miss
once.
"Sreech!"He opened his mouth."EH!"
A wave hit me so hard,I smashed against the barrels of that
stuff with the X on poured into my mouth,everything
went blurry.
"Hae, 'll take the high road*hicup*and I'll take the low road*hicup*.So,uh...Somethin',sumin',sumtin'.*hicup*"
I looked at my sholder."Hey..*hicup*Heey, dya do that?"I wobbled around like a spinda.
"I'm a bounty hunter,I was hired to kill you,hince you being
my employeer's enemy in the polls."He said.
"Polls?*hicup*You mean Eris Vil.*hicup*He a meanie.*hicup*"
"Erk...I wasn't suppose to tell you..I'm out of here!"
He slithered out quicky.I wobbled over to Sky and put my arm
on here shoulder.
"Ya now*hicup*I like you.*hicup*"I pulled her closer."Scratch
that*hicup*I love ya.*hicup*You are HOT."
Chapter 5:Luna
-Sky's POV-
That night,Anders got his wound fixed up and we had to stay at the motel,unfortionatly,there was only one room left and it
had only one bed.(hehe)
Hopefully,the alcohol's effect will ware off soon.
(Goes on from there how ever you like-in a fanfic!)

This fic inspired me.

Combined with thoughts proccessed during reading of eeveelution fics, I have an Umbreon character who, after evolving, grew to hate his trainer, and once abandoned, well...

He later kills said trainer. Your fics are dark... Very... dark. I have summoned the courage to read Optimism!

What I find more ironic than anything about this is the idea that people think this pikachu "went nuts after evolution" because it gave its trainer temporary paralysis. Assuming this takes place in the same universe as your other stories, they don't know what "going nuts after evolution" actually looks like any more than they know what causes it.

Good fic. although i still dont Know why i read this stuff. I love being a pokemon trainer, but these fics make me feel guilty. Oh well, that aint your fault. Actually, it is your fault due to the persuasive way you right your fics. its my fault for reading them. whos Alex btw? Ive heard him mentioned in a few reviews...

BTW, Currently my favorite prevo is Munchlax, but i think there all cute.

Aww,wow...yes it is. _

Hey, I really like all of your stuff. My favorite pre-evo has to be eevee. Even though it's super hard to raise, if you don't let it evolve, it can learn some interesting moves. And of course Pichu just for cuteness.

*claps* excellent, I love it! A very good point, and I could see this happening easily.

Honestly, I hate pre-evos.. because they were only made to be cute.. The only one I've seen so far, that has any significance, is Wynnaut, because it learns the Attack, Encore, which I greatly prefer over Destiny Bond.

Though, friendly evolutions in general, I love Crobat, Espeon, and Umbereon.

This was... amazing. It was well written, with plenty of emotion and the final line was really good. The thing that I think hits it home is that I know for a fact that I do that to my GB Pokémon. I'm all lovely to my Eevee, feeding it, grooming it, never letting it lose, but the second it evolves I'll let it get beaten to a pulp. Sometimes. Very good indeed.

My fave? Either Pichu or Azurill. Smoochum scares me.

You bring up a very good point. The Smoochum bit at the end had a nice sting to it.

My favorite pre-evo? Hm... Has to be Elekid.

Mareo: Hmm... You know that E-mail I sent you about 'Trade'? I take it back. Completly. You've actually convinced me now of your viewpoint...

Anime: (To you.) Ok, you godda teach me how to brainwash people like that...

Mareo: LOL anyway, please accept an idiot's apology.

It is sad, but makes people to think.

That slav... ehm "trainer" must die!

Poor Pichu. That is sad. I mean, friendship evolution is supposed top be something...good. Not evil. That trainer is evil