 senselesswords 2009-12-09 . chapter 38I think MadaMag is right, who could've known that this amount of action was ahead of us and with a bed as the main scenario.
It was a very good chapter, specially now that it feels like they're finally leaving the angst behind.
Congratulations to you both, you've done a great work so far. |
 Lady Z48 2009-12-06 . chapter 38I am so proud of you two authors and of this story. I just get so emotional as I read it. This will be one of my favorite story so far and probably for a long time. Thank you for sharing and hope we can get the whole story soon.
Kay |
 MadaMag 2009-12-06 . chapter 38Actually they are only laying in bed. But how much action is in either chapter :D |
 senselesswords 2009-12-04 . chapter 37First, let me thank you for this ridiculous fast update, even more giving what you've been trough in your personal life and your usual update's schedule from the previous chapters. Having said that, now to the actual review:
So things are on the right path again! It's so good to see Diego healing, slowly, but getting better. The same thing goes for Alejandro.
About the ribs, I really hope that with the proper care and time they could eventually heal, I can't imagine Diego always suffering because of that fateful day and Zorro gone forever (I know that that was your original intention).
I loved the interaction between the characters, specially between the good doctor and Diego.
Thanks again for this wonderful chapter and hopefully the next ones will come as quickly as this.
Bye |
 MadaMag 2009-12-04 . chapter 37Another great chapter. Yay for us. Thanks for You. |
 MadaMag 2009-11-30 . chapter 36Certainly, this story can one left breathless.
Ps. Who is taking care of the tawern for the whole time? Or Victoria closed it fer the time beginning? |
 T41 2009-11-29 . chapter 36 Good chapter! The recovery seems realistic and I'm looking forward to more. Diego and Victoria are both stubborn and spirited. Glad to see more of Diego's personality coming out! |
 senselesswords 2009-11-28 . chapter 36As things just couldn't get worst for this family!
At least Alejandro seems to be doing well, but please how much can you hate Diego's ribs to keep breaking them like that? By now I wonder if there's nay more ribs left to break.
Anyway, thank you so much for updating! it feels so good when there's a new alert in my email box. All I want is for Diego to get better soon and that's A LOT coming from me, because I always enjoy when the main characters suffer a bit.
Hehe I don't envy those three as acting nurses, because I doubt that there could be two patients more stubborn than Alejandro and Diego.
Thanks again for the story, I hope to read the next chapter before new year. Bye! |
 MadaMag 2009-11-08 . chapter 35Wow, how mean. Don Alejandro got a heart attack. :D
Now all the household went on Felipe's shoulders... |
 senselesswords 2009-11-05 . chapter 35You updated! thank you so much, I always think that you could drop this story without its end.
It's such a relieve to see that Diego is finally healing, although slowly, and he's starting to get a few more lines...hehe.
About Alejandro, this was coming for sure, with all the hints that you have been dropping to us about his heart and previous symptoms, I can only hope that it is nothing too serious that will keep him ill for an even longer time than Diego's recovery (could you make it into a pre-infarction or stress instead of the real heart attack...only my opinion)because it would drift the attention from the real plot line and it might start looking as a filler instead of real advance.
Anyway, no matter what you do I'll keep reading this fic, because it's really good and dramatic.
I can only wish for a quick update or a sign of life within these weeks...I guess I'll just have to wait.
Bye |
 Kay 2009-11-04 . chapter 35 I love the story and am looking forward to the rest of the story. Thanks for sharing and hope it won't be long that we can read the rest of it. "A Father's Love" may have Diego's death but not Zorro's. On "Love's Triump" showed us that it would even though, Diego's illness would take a long time to heal and now Alejandro is illness, but hopeful, he will get over in time to help his son, Diego to recalm his health and for him to answer his questions about him being Zorro and also his grandson in hearing and speaking for the first time in both to Diego's and Alejandro's surprises. A wonderful story so far and hurry up with the rest of it. ;-) |
 Harris428 2009-10-22 . chapter 34Update! ! Update! ! ! Waiting anxiously. |
 MadaMag 2009-10-19 . chapter 34What did she heard? Tornado? :D
Yay, Diego is finally awake (even if only for a bit)!
While your story is more 'real' it's not the show alike. In tv Diego got bitten be a snake, get a bullet, even broke his leg... and shortly after he is ridding and making stunts as if nothing happened. |
 senselesswords 2009-10-15 . chapter 34She heard what? ah curiosity it's killing me right now.
I liked the chapter, it's good to see Diego finally waking up and taking place in this story a little more.
I do have one question. I'm not a doctor but I find really hard to believe that, given the time that has passed since the beating, Diego's ribs might still break. I mean that if some were already cracked they'd be healing by now, a bone just doesn't break that easily unless you have a previous condition, which he hasn't. In my opinion that little detail deviates a bit my attention from the real plot and it feels like there's something off in the story. It's just my opinion and in any way I can ensure what I'm saying, but I just wanted you to know. But given this story it's probably finished (or almost) I don't think this comment could make such a difference.
On other matters, I was really surprised (in a good way) too see this update so soon, I hope the others will be more regular. Again, great story...but what an evil cliffhanger!
I don't care about spelling, just post the next chapter soon please! |
 Saela 2009-10-14 . chapter 34Your story is going great, but I have just one small question. Doesn't Diego ever need to eat? I know that in some cases of coma, people are so far gone that they don't need food, even though they're still alive, but now he's been awake for two days, after having been unconcious for weeks, and all he gets is a bit of water :s? It doesn't seem very possible... |