 MadaMag 2009-11-08 . chapter 35Wow, how mean. Don Alejandro got a heart attack. :D
Now all the household went on Felipe's shoulders... |
 senselesswords 2009-11-05 . chapter 35You updated! thank you so much, I always think that you could drop this story without its end.
It's such a relieve to see that Diego is finally healing, although slowly, and he's starting to get a few more lines...hehe.
About Alejandro, this was coming for sure, with all the hints that you have been dropping to us about his heart and previous symptoms, I can only hope that it is nothing too serious that will keep him ill for an even longer time than Diego's recovery (could you make it into a pre-infarction or stress instead of the real heart attack...only my opinion)because it would drift the attention from the real plot line and it might start looking as a filler instead of real advance.
Anyway, no matter what you do I'll keep reading this fic, because it's really good and dramatic.
I can only wish for a quick update or a sign of life within these weeks...I guess I'll just have to wait.
Bye |
 Kay 2009-11-04 . chapter 35 I love the story and am looking forward to the rest of the story. Thanks for sharing and hope it won't be long that we can read the rest of it. "A Father's Love" may have Diego's death but not Zorro's. On "Love's Triump" showed us that it would even though, Diego's illness would take a long time to heal and now Alejandro is illness, but hopeful, he will get over in time to help his son, Diego to recalm his health and for him to answer his questions about him being Zorro and also his grandson in hearing and speaking for the first time in both to Diego's and Alejandro's surprises. A wonderful story so far and hurry up with the rest of it. ;-) |
 Harris428 2009-10-22 . chapter 34Update! ! Update! ! ! Waiting anxiously. |
 MadaMag 2009-10-19 . chapter 34What did she heard? Tornado? :D
Yay, Diego is finally awake (even if only for a bit)!
While your story is more 'real' it's not the show alike. In tv Diego got bitten be a snake, get a bullet, even broke his leg... and shortly after he is ridding and making stunts as if nothing happened. |
 senselesswords 2009-10-15 . chapter 34She heard what? ah curiosity it's killing me right now.
I liked the chapter, it's good to see Diego finally waking up and taking place in this story a little more.
I do have one question. I'm not a doctor but I find really hard to believe that, given the time that has passed since the beating, Diego's ribs might still break. I mean that if some were already cracked they'd be healing by now, a bone just doesn't break that easily unless you have a previous condition, which he hasn't. In my opinion that little detail deviates a bit my attention from the real plot and it feels like there's something off in the story. It's just my opinion and in any way I can ensure what I'm saying, but I just wanted you to know. But given this story it's probably finished (or almost) I don't think this comment could make such a difference.
On other matters, I was really surprised (in a good way) too see this update so soon, I hope the others will be more regular. Again, great story...but what an evil cliffhanger!
I don't care about spelling, just post the next chapter soon please! |
 Saela 2009-10-14 . chapter 34Your story is going great, but I have just one small question. Doesn't Diego ever need to eat? I know that in some cases of coma, people are so far gone that they don't need food, even though they're still alive, but now he's been awake for two days, after having been unconcious for weeks, and all he gets is a bit of water :s? It doesn't seem very possible... |
 ilovedobermans 2009-10-13 . chapter 34Oh! OH! Finally he's awake for a bit longer and his Dad and Felipe heard! And that cliff hanger! I was just feeling grateful that I just logged in minutes before your latest chapter appeared in my email box, when I got to the end! Oh, Man! I really, really REALLY hope you post tomorrow! But aside from that, I am very grateful that you are posting as quickly as you can, and that you have it (I hope I'm right!) finished! I personally don't care about spelling, etc! POST THAT PUPPY! ; )' !!
THANK YOU! |
 TomcatGM 2009-10-08 . chapter 33I enjoyed this chapter. I'm also pleased that the beta process will be quicker. :) This seemed like a good turning point; the story seems to be moving forward now. Post soon! |
 senselesswords 2009-10-08 . chapter 33Thank you so much, you finally updated! I knew he had to wake up by now...they couldn't be doing all of that effort for nothing, so I wasn't disappointed. The only complain I have is the possible ridiculous long waiting until the next chapter comes. Just so you know I don't care the chapters aren't betaed as long as they keep coming.
Bye. |
 senselesswords 2009-10-08 . chapter 1Ha! I realized I haven't reviewed this story (except for chapter 32). I like they way you started here, a bit different from the original story but with more background...maybe it was a hint of how long this story was going to be? (not that I'm complaining...I love this story) |
 ilovedobermans 2009-10-07 . chapter 33Oh! Thank goodness he finally awakened! This a great story, and I am so grateful he is awake! Can't say any more right now, still absorbing the impact of the latest chapter. |
 senselesswords 2009-09-25 . chapter 32I found this story two days ago (after I found the original and more tragic one) and I must say that you two completely and literally glued me to my screen for two afternoons. I think you've done a great work in here and I'm already waiting for an update, which I hope won't take too long, considering the trouble you both had with time and schedules.
About the previous chapter (or the one before that?) I had a good time reading about Victoria's CPR, even though it's a technique from 1956...but hey, it worked just fine in the story.
Please, update soon. Bye. |
 T41 2009-09-24 . chapter 32 Enjoying this story! Can't wait to see how it ends. |
 Leisa Jorgensen 2009-09-23 . chapter 32 Please keep writing the story is a nail biter hope it can be finished soon. Great writing eveyone. Thanks |