Besides My Name Is Sakura Haruno and Black Leather and Silver Chains...This is by far the best thing I've read in a -long- time.

It was deep and was not that cliche' crap. It held meaning, love, pure human reactions, and maturity (not rating wise).

That's hard to find on Fanfiction, in my opinion, but you proved that there are good mature fictions (especially InoSaku ones).

So I will allow you to bask in your glory, feel the sun smile on you, as I say this, "You're story rocked."

I loved it, I loved it, and oh dear god did I love it!

If you continue to write like this I will garuntee you will hear more of me AND have me as a fangirl.

Forever yours,
Shay.

First comment.
Woah.
You know, stories as deep as yours, you have to take time to read and linger upon each word. I wonder if you lingered upon every word when you wrote this.
Anyways. I really liked how you broke this up into small sections so it wasn't like the traditional story that goes on and on and on, one giant paragraph after another. Those get tiring after a while. So this was really refreshing.

And this definitely made my night.
THANK YOU~

so deep...
i love it. awesome ending too. you can never diss a story with an awesome ending. xD

It was, very impactful, the whole story is an incredibly beautiful timeline. And I'm continuously using commas because, it's just, GARH! I loved the way you used the concept of 'Prince Charming' and 'Fairytale' on all of this, you've turned the story itself into more than just a fairytale, GREAT JOB!
Critism heyy? Hmm...can't think of anything, because you've got your own writing style, also with how you set the whole story up and with those little amusing remarks of Sakura's. Plus, I really honestly enjoyed the story. kekekeke...

I really loved this. A strange pairing which I am not keen on, but it was brilliantly written.

Really lovely. I liked the idea of it. The end was just stunning.

The whole idea of this just made me go WTF when I saw the alert, then WOW after I read it. I know you like this pairing, but I never expected you to write it - or to write it so damn brilliantly. It is beautiful!

Really beautiful piece. The overall thing just made me want to cry, how it was constructed and so well written. Amazing.

Really lovely. The overall thing was just so beautiful.

Really pretty idea. I like it.

The last few lines were gorgeous. I loved them.

Really structured, and the link back to the middle at the start and end for the main promise was beautiful. I loved this new layout, it fits well for this piece and I loved the title too, strangely. Really lovely work!

Beautiful description. A strange pairing, but I just loved it.

This was very touching. Normally, yuri is just plain SEXSEXSEX on wheels. But this was in depth, not all about sex (I mean, it was barely mentioned!) and I thought the idea of it overall was great. Nice work.