 shadow zombie 2009-06-03 . chapter 20ok i do hate fiona now at least in this story great job looking forward to the last chapter and the sequel |
 Master Metallix 2009-05-29 . chapter 20It's almost over? Aww... Oh, well. It's been great, and now it just needs a excellent finisher that will have Shao Kahn announcing "NuclearCookout wins! Ultimate Fatality!" Couldn't NICOLE have blocked the signal from the PDA, though, so thatFiona wouldn't have escaped?
On the other hand, this gamma ray weapon concept sounds interesting. However, I happen to know about a weapon called the neutron bomb, which detonates and fires neutrons and gamma rays (but not charged particles) in all directions; such a weapon inflicts much more damage to biological matter than to material infrastructure (though the damaging effects of extreme blast and heat still apply). Therefore, gamma rays could just fly through the Xeniths without damaging any of their (invariably non-biological) components. However, gamma rays may be effective against circuitry, microchips, and other delicate mechanisms, so I may be wrong here.
Anyway, great job getting this far, and I look forward to a fitting denouement for this installment of your "Hover" series. Keep up the good work, and see you next chapter. |
 Master Metallix 2009-05-26 . chapter 19Okay, so Fiona helped prolong Rosemary's life for at least a while. She's still a conniving tramp in this story, perhaps even more so than her canon representation in the comics (of which I have only secondhand knowledge). I forgot to mention this in last chapter's review, but will Fiona end up pregnant? If so, then I see a small variety of possible futures for her and the baby - and none of them look particularly desirable. Keep up the good work, and see you next chapter. |
 shadow zombie 2009-05-25 . chapter 19great chapter it almost had me in tears i hope tails mom will be ok |
 shadow zombie 2009-05-23 . chapter 17great chapter man fiona that witch i figured she would try to get between tails and Kaolin Kaolin you go girl |
 Master Metallix 2009-05-20 . chapter 18Fiona just doesn't learn... is it just me, or does this chapter seem shorter than usual? Maybe it's because the events are all in a direct sequence without different points of view or time lapses between, though I'm not complaining or anything. Keep up the good work, and see you next chapter. |
 Master Metallix 2009-05-16 . chapter 17Great chapter, and the fact that I expected Fiona to pull a stunt like this doesn't take away any of the scene's impact. Kaolin's metal leg had a beneficial side effect after all. I'm glad Kaolin also knew better than to doubt Tails. Keep up the good work, and see you next chapter. |
 Dark Fox Tailz 2009-05-15 . chapter 17Yeah just as I thought, Fiona Fox can't be trusted? (The stupid b*!) I mean she's trying every dumb thing she can, to get Tails into bed with her.
Please update again soon & thank you. |
 Master Metallix 2009-05-11 . chapter 16Okay, Fiona's stil trying to gain trust, and I for one won't give it to her. Tails knows what he's doing.
Of course the Xenith autoweapons had to be upgraded to resist the sound-based weapons... good thing an EMP blast still worked.
About the sonic cannons: have you researched conic sections, such as parabolas? Satellite dishes and other sound-related equipment are often shaped like parabolas to focus incoming signals onto an antenna. Perhaps the sonic cannons employed a similar concept in their construction?
Antoine and Bunnie: You will be missed. T.T
Keep up the good work, and see you next chapter. |
 shadow zombie 2009-05-11 . chapter 16i don't know what to say great chapter lots of action lets hope this story has a happy ending for tails and kaolin and the others |
 shadow zombie 2009-05-11 . chapter 15great chapter full of grit and action that kept me on the edge of my seat keep up the good job |
 Master Metallix 2009-05-06 . chapter 15Good job. I offer my condolences to Sally for the loss of her brother; Elias Acorn will be missed. Those Xeniths just keep getting more and more obstinate. Great battle scene, though. Keep up the good work, and see you next chapter. |
 NuclearCookout 2009-05-03 . chapter 14A note on "slipperier" has been added. |
 Master Metallix 2009-05-03 . chapter 14Nice chapter. I'm still sure Fiona is full of bull, and she's just looking for a situation where she'll have an alibi when (or if) Sonic or the others do get killed. Oh, and "slipperier" should be "more slippery." Other than that, great job. Keep up the good work. |
 Master Metallix 2009-04-28 . chapter 13Okay, Fiona was Mason's accomplice, and killed him to shut him up. AND she's still trying to provoke Tails. The situation just keeps getting beter and better. Keep up the good work, and see you next chapter. |