Aw, i love this little one shot. It is really powerful. I first read this, when i had no account, now i do, and i can comment on it. Again, fantastic job.

Ok, this is the first fanfic where i have laughed out loud - where Rosalie snidely refers to E&B as a-hole & idiot. It sounds just like her! I enjoyed it!

OMG SOO GOOD! You should continue after the contest is over.

I love Rose's last line.

I voted for you :D

-AceCade

that's so ironic that you did this, because i wrote this conversation also (pretty recently), but yours is much better, i only wrote a thin paragraph or two. i didn't consider rosalie protesting...it's an interesting take. "And so the asshole fell in love with the idiot." hahaa, that made me laugh out loud. (very true, btw. edward just wants the best for bella but seems to be completely unable to provide it himself.) it's SO rosalie. i picture her as very scarastic, very snotty. sort of like very nice last line, also. one thing was that was sort of disconcering was how quickly rosalie's thoughts of bella changed...how to put it? hm...like, in the beginning, when she's very hostile and mean towards bella (although you did say how she though she may not be happy at the news of her death anymore) and then as soon as she's talking to bella she becomes more accepting, especially when she asks whether edward hurt her. were you going for that? oh, and i also liked that little bit you put in about having her hair down making her think easier. :)

Brilliant POV. Rosalie is so conflicted with feeling annoyed by Bella and Edward and then concerned for Bella when she calls.

"And so The Asshole fell in love with the Idiot"! lol Just perfect for her to think petty thoughts like that about them, she is so irrated by their relationship.

Then her concern "Did he hurt you?" Its sweet and it came across as surprising, even for Rosalie herself, to feel concerned.

And though she is annoyed by Bella asking for help she is also touched and torn by the decision. I loved reading this, Rosalie is a misinterpretated soul; loved your version. Well done :o)

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Ah, good one-shot. :)

aw i loved it

i wish stephanie ahd written the conversation

oh... plz make another chappie!plz plz plz plz

its good you should like make it about Bellas pregnancy from roses pov

please please please keep going

It's nice to hear the conversation between Bella and Rosalie. I always have wondered what it might have sounded like, and what Rosalie's thoughts were. I really liked it.

I like that last line; it sort of keys to what was to follow. Nicely written, and good selection of subject material.