Nice Work =D

I love this. I love how subtle the pair is, not loud and obvious with their attraction, just quiet little cues that only those who know them well can pick up on. They're just so elegant. The description of their dance was absolutely beautiful.

i imagine this little world as 19 century or something
and well i love it
and i love lucius malfoy so.. i guess is quite perfect
haven't u ever tought about making a long story?

Well-written. Good job.

Ah. Very nice to see their 'correct' courtship through the eyes of Narcissa's mother. I like that they're subtle, but to the discerning eye, the signs are 'screaming' their preferences.

Oh, that was so sweet! I loved the way you described in detail how she danced with the young men, but was different with Lucius. She is so proper it almost seemed naughty when he stroked her back with his thumb, lol! They belong together.

I loved this. It was so beautifully written and the detail was amazing. One of my favorites. Great job!