|Reviews for Mouse Guard: Fall 1152|
| Much Ado About Nonny 4/2/09 . chapter 2
Sorry this took so long.
Very good. I see you've added a few things to the narrative; Conrad polishing off a second bowl of soup, etc. And you've done this while sticking strictly to the events in the book...very thorough. I like it. When can I expect the next chapter?
| Much Ado About Nonny 3/16/09 . chapter 1
Is this a novelization? If so, you might want to consider adding a little more detail. Not that you haven't done well so far - you've done a great job - but novelizing opens up the option of a little more description. Like surroundings, for instance: not everyone has read Mouse Guard, and it makes it a easier for new MG readers to understand when you mention that it's fall, and that the leaves are falling, etc. Just my opinion...
Anyway, kudos on being the first to write in this category. It takes a lot of perseverance...as you've probably noticed, since there aren't a lot of reviews yet. Good for you! Please continue...this fandom has been woefully neglected.