I didn't like it. I loved it!! TOTALLY!! You almost made me cry when Eiji refused Ooishi... T_T (almost!!- meaning: actually I did not yet XD)
but then i definetly laughed at Kaidoh' "it's a cold and it's a broken hallelujah."
i really absolutly love your story! Can't wait for chapter 13!!
love and hugs
Anni-CAt

hey, it's me again. [dunno if you remember me xD] but this was totally awesome. :] the story is simply amazing. the writing style, the way you portray sadness and characters and emotion so well is just.. awesome. xD sorry i can't think of anything other descriptive words atm OTL. the only real "problem" i had [don't worry it was REALLY minor. xD] is that the resolution of all the problems seemed a bit fast in my opinion. Everything's cool, but it just seemed way too rushed to me. I probably would have tried to stretch it a bit more and elaborate a bit more on the actual way things got tied together again, but it was still good. :] besides, i don't really have the right to complain since a] this story is already amazing and b] you update. xD hahaha anyways, thanks for reading this, and THANK YOU FOR WRITING. (:

a loyal reader, Miki

wow, i actually thought this had finnished last chapter - and then i saw it and i was so exited XD
really good :)

I think I like that even though things are somewhat resolved, Golden Pair aren't entirely back together; it seems a little more realistic. There are just some things that you have to seize in the moment, and it seems like Oishi and Eiji's relationship was something like that.

Poor Momo. But it was sweet of Kaidoh to help him out. Kaidoh needs some more screentime; he's got great potential but he doesn't show up in fics often. XDD

Cute!! Ryoma can't admit it :p

Nice prelude :D
I'm going to read the next chapters after school (we have finals!)

this story plays with your heart strings so much :'( I was seriously crying and at the end of this chapter I think everybody in my house heard "FUJI YOU BASTARD!" when I read the last line lol (I actually really love Fuji) I really enjoy it though and am excited to keep reading

wo...
like the prelude.
love fuji and ryoma fics.

You know, another chapter title that would be good for this chapter (chap 11) could be "Reconciliation." But only cuz I totally love that word! (And it fits. But that was just a random suggestion.)

That was great. This chapter showed how everyone really felt. I was surprised by the sudden emotion from Tezuka. All in all, it was fantastic. Can't wait for the next chapter! XD

I really, definatly, absolutly love your story!! ^^
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Please keep up the brilliant work!

greets Anni-Cat

It's kind of weird to be reviewing a later chapter and then an earlier one (no, I didn't just skip to chapter nine, i read everything, im just... rereading...), but I just wanted to say for technicality's sake (I guess) for the golden pair thing losing to Inui and Kaidoh it should be 0-6 (you say the person's score first and then the opponent's). Or you could say Inui and Kaidoh beat them 6-0. Saying "6-0 to Inui and Kaidoh" implies that they beat Inui and Kaidoh 6-0, which is kind of confusing because in the next sentence you imply that they lost. Yeah... sorry about that rant, I play tennis and whenever people switch scores it can mean a lot. Not trying to sound obnoxious or anything.

hihi, yeahh you updated.
but i was having this hard time figuring out what happened in the story when i finally remembered it as something tragic.
seriously, its very tragic.
they are all broken down and all so sad.

i feel sad after reading it too.
aww.
try something happier?
(:

Wow, this chapter was intense. I wanted to cry reading it. Glad to see they made up. I look forward to seeing what you come up with next.

Its so fucking good. my god. XD XD XD XD XD XD XD. you seriously should make a Pillar pair version of this. Like It really rocks. My god