A few things...

First, while you can do a lot with Gunther and Jane, seeing as you are writing a hundred one-shots about Jane and the Dragon, perhaps it would behoove you to keep the other characters present as well. Jester is beginning to pop up here and there, and we saw Rake once, but that was about all the variety you gave us. The rest have all been about Jane, and, more specifically, Gunther. So, perhaps you should widen your perspective?

Also, while you have some very good ideas on the characters you do write about, your lack of grammar and bits of spelling make it hard to read even just a few paragraphs all the way through. Try typing up your one-shots on Microsoft Word first, and then copying them to this website once they are spell-checked and grammar-checked from Word. I know that Word is not the best judge of spelling and grammar, especially in the case of the latter, but it's at least a start. Or, if you don't want to do that, you could always get a beta.

Thank you for posting for Jane and the Dragon- there aren't nearly enough fics for that show. Just please be nice on your readers and make their jobs easier!

Yes, the giant dragon that would fly around the castle is certainly somewhat more memorable than someone's eyes. The dragon's what you have to look out for, after all. : )

lol, Brilliant ending ... so in depth with the characters...

I can see where Jester is coming from, but in the show, the way Jane looks at Jester ... I know ... It's love :)

For some reason, Jester's point of view had me playing "Sunshine of your love" in my head. I like his and Gunther's rivalry here as he sorts through his own thoughts. I could see Jester thinking exactly these thoughts!

I love Jane and Dragon together! Nice little chap...

Yes, being taken into the castle really was Gunther's saving grace. Nice chap.

Just one word: AW!

Cute chap - I am parial to Jane's green eyes, being a green eyed girl myself! ;-) You switched from third to first person narrative again though - seems you only do that for Gunther. So maybe you ARE doing it intentionally in his chapters? It's a little confusing, though :P

Poor Gunther! :-{ Sometimes I just wanna huggle him!

That seems very in character for Jane - she's definitely an outdoorsy kinda gal!

I liked this one, although you switch from 'he' to 'I' again. Consider this a big no-no. lol.

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I actually liked this one. I think it had a good flow to it, although the last sentences of both paragraphs did seem a little out of place. Overall, though, it had good content and style!

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This seems a little contradictory and that makes it jumpy to read. I do like the thoughts behind this oneshot and Belonging, but they were not written in a way that conveyed the feeling.

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I like this except you switch povs halfway through. You start out with "Gunther..." and should not, then, end with "I".

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This was so cute! lol. I loved the story completely plot and character-wise. Just to do with structure- watch the apostrophes. If he's giving the tomatoes to Pepper, they don't own anything (so it shouldn't be "tomato's"). Also, make sure that you go to a new line when a new person speaks. It kind of messes up your paragraph style, but the reader gets confused if you don't/

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