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Michally 2/26/12 . chapter 36This is such a great story! I am heartbroken that you seem to have abandoned it. Please come back to it. Please! |
TalaStar 2/13/12 . chapter 1I am very sad now! I just realized your last update to this story was about a year ago! I am very sad that this isn't finished [ I read all three of these stories(aitmwi, twgc, an after he was gone) within 2 days(they are very addicting!) and as soon as I got to the last chapter on this story I tried to go to the next chapter and nearly cried when I couldn't! I just wanted to tell you you're an amazing author, these stories are very well written and plotted and are, once again, very addicting! I have a 1yr old child and had to read around chasing her around and still read them in 2days! lol very well done! I applaud you, and will continue hoping that you magically are able to update and finish this story. I'm going to be a little dead inside until it's done! ] |
TalaStar 2/12/12 . chapter 36was this the end? Please say no! I need more! lol ] |
KatNdraco 2/12/12 . chapter 36 Ahhhh! I need more! Addicted! Must. read. more! O.o |
Gilraen Elensar 1/11/12 . chapter 36Oh! I can't wait for next chapter! *:.。. o()o .。.:* |
Tsudama 11/25/11 . chapter 36I really really loved your fic (this one and the other pne 'The world's gone crazy)! I read them all in 2 days and a half, if that's no loving it! I was so sad when i saw the last you published it was one year ago, thought i hope you will miraculously find some inspiration! Tsuudama P.S. If i had to write about all the things I liked, like the time turner thing which is not new but still in a completly innovative way or Grabbe and Goyle not so much idiots, or Harry and Draco... Bref, I loved everything and it would take me at least 2 messages to tell you everything :D So i stop here! Ah the last thing if I were not so busy with my studies, i would probably ask you to translate it in French. Perhaps in summer! |
Reader-anonymous-writer 11/4/11 . chapter 36Nathaniel! I'm happy you're here. How . . . Where did Potter learn to brew that potion with such finesse?.. Yes, he would most definitely have to keep an eye on the boy. As much as he may hate it, there seemed to be a lot of untapped potential in him. Very, very glad. Messing with Malfoys' heads. When will Severus get to know at least some of Harry's secrets? He has already noticed change in Harry. And what about Draco? Will Draco tell his impressions and musings to his godfather? If I say no, then there is nothing. If I say yes, well, Harry is basically cheating on his love with another, even if that person is another him. I would settle on Harry and this Draco being friends, not more. Because Lucius would hardly accept even friendship. And I don't want to give up on returning to Nathaniel's universe. he should get to know him. He found himself immensely curious about this other reality Potter had spoken of. He hadn't been forthcoming in his description. And Potter had seemed very tense around Albus. The question was, why? Severus, get Harry's confidence and don't break his trust. I hope Harry has his Draco's gift-necklace with him. When this Draco notices it... Severus had to admit though; he liked knowing something the headmaster didn't. It was a very nice change. Brilliant. And twins will ask how Harry knew about purple side-effect colour. Yes, I know that Ron accepted this a little two easily, but, honestly, I got tired of making him a prat, Agree. Maybe, shock overload burned his prejudices. I don't think that the contract doesn't take writing down for somebody else into account. I think that Draco will be affected by the spell. I'm glad Draco is on their side. I want Harry/James, Nathaniel, Tom, Severus-spy, Draca be in the same universe. I don't want Remus, Sirius, James, Peter, Dumbledore or Lily to be here. Well, I can tolerate Remus and Dumbledore, if Dumbledore accepts that he isn't the Supreme Ruler of Britain. The 'easiest' way would be for Tom to travel here, it would be not unexpected after his basilisk dies. But I don't want to leave Tom's world at mercy of murderous Dumbledore either. I can only hope that Tom will be able to defeat him, quickly. And considering, that James has become Luna's receptor, I wish that they all live in the second universe. But the first universe needs help more, for in it not one but two wizards became power-hungry. Unlike Tom, Albus can hardly see that he doesn't have to be the one to stop all 'evil'. Is Draca pregnant? "We could lend you the use of a house elf," Dumbledore suggested. So generous, oh almighty Dumbledore! Harry has his own elf, Dobby, if you have forgotten, and Harry doesn't have to ask your permission to call him. And Sirius's house... Harry doesn't know Sirius left it to him? And Harry has yet to see any Potter estates, or Potters' will. Luna's Receptor Poll: Draco: 26 Fine by me. At least, cross-universe problems are unlikely to arise. The main problem will be fighting against Voldemort, but Voldemort is unlikely to know about Luna's ability, yet. Harry has enough on his plate without the added pressure of it Besides, Harry/James already is receptor of Nathaniel's Luna. Well... Your story is crazy mix of: 1. travel between realities; 2. Harry being sorted into Slytherin; 3. Draco not joining Voldemort; 4. Harry - Draco pairing; 5. Harry, Ron and others forming ignoble Gryffindor gang similar to Marauders; 6. Severus being Harry's father with Lily applying a glamour; 7. Dumbledore being evil, power-hungry and prejudiced against pure-bloods; 8. Tom Marvolo Riddle being fair, just, wise and kind; 9. Harry bonding with a basilisk hatchling. Any of these could have brought forth an interesting plot. But together... You have an enormous potential to change two worlds. Thank you. Good luck. |
Thenchick 10/10/11 . chapter 36post more plz! I love this story and I want more! |
jetsonastro24 9/24/11 . chapter 31By your logic about the sides of the war there are five sides, Dumbledore's, Harry's, Voldemort's, the Ministry's, and Dead; morbid but true. |
SophiaVenganza 9/22/11 . chapter 36NOOOOOOOOOOOO! *sobs uncontrollably* there's no more? my life is over! what will i do now without having these gloriously brilliant pieces of literature. JKR should bow down before you and take note of how things should have gone down! please write more I'll actually have to contemplate going to sleep so i dont get bored sitting on my ass all day doing nothing! |
DarkRubberNeck 9/20/11 . chapter 36Draco and Luna for Hermione? That would be interesting _ |
starlenia 9/14/11 . chapter 36BLAISE ZAMBINI, ohmygod please. Agh. ive been reading the first one and then this one for DAYS. havent been able to stop. haha it's online on my phone, so i have it with me at all times. when are you going to updateeeeee? Its so good. Here are some things that i've thought through it. the first one was bloody brilliant and amazing. absolutely amazing. The sequel kind of pissed me off a bit at some points. *shrugs* but thats alright. I dont like that Malfoy became a girl, i dont like that he even came INTO that world. you could have had something so interesting if harry had tried with the Original Malfoy. This one annoys me too much. FAR too much. He needs to be cockier, he needs to be more snarky and sarcastic, with more hidden inside...i mean i KNOW that he spent 2 years in Harry's influence but hes MALFOY. DRACO MALFOY. though having a different past can justify as to why he is so different. But then there is the point that Draca had said that they are alot alike that that world too. *shrugs* the character just seems a bit off to me. but hey-its your story, im just telling you whats going on in my mind. But it really would have been more interesting if the original Malfoy had tried with Harry... And AGH a Girl? that almost made me stop reading it for a bit, but i continued because i like the story. The moment he became pregnant also made me want to stop. i was like "REALLY?" it would have been alright if he had stayed a girl then, but right after i got used to it and accepted him because of the baby you made him a boy. *agitated* if you have ever watched the musical "into the woods" that is what this has come to. The first half is amazing and is really cool. then the second half rolls around and everything turns to shit. sure there are good songs here and there but really its confusing and annoying to those who enjoyed the first half and it ruins the whole plot for them so they try to forget about it. LIKE KUROSHITSUJI. season two was horrid. Okay so your fanfiction IS better than those examples, but...you get the point? a good ending is what you i said, i love the story and havent been able to stop reading it, there are just some things that irked me. So i hope that you find your muse again and can think more on what to do next. good luck, i cant wait for a new chapter. |
Sharon T 9/12/11 . chapter 36This is great, please update |
ethan thorn 9/9/11 . chapter 36This is a great story and wish for it to keep going i do hope there is more chapters being worked on. |
Krucksue 7/20/11 . chapter 36Please please pretty please tell me that you are going to write more. It's so good and I'm so caught up in it. |