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Ms. Marauder-Cullen
2009-11-29 . chapter 19
*sigh* I simply love finding these updates in my inbox. I adore how you are portraying the interaction between Lucius and Harry and I find it interesting with the way everyone (Evan and Narcissa not to mention Harry) reacted to the kiss that Lucius gave him. I'm also glad that you didn't go into details on the Quidditch match, since I tend to skip over them, unless they are very interesting or I get the feeling something big will happen in it. I'm glad that Hermione is involved (slightly) in this, but I wonder if it will amount to anything? I know that they aren't best friends like in the books, but will Hermione be used as leverage for something later on, possibly? I'm also glad that Draco isn't being rude to Theo anymore and I was pleased that Harry was pleasant to him, as well, since Theo is one of my favorite 'under used' characters.
Excelent job as always, and I will anxiously be awaiting the next bit of this exciting story. :)
MissMurderDoll
2009-11-28 . chapter 19
This is good so far, i cant wait for more!
~Katie
shenmi meiren
2009-11-28 . chapter 19
intriguing...
i like how harry manages to be innocent and not-so-innocent at the same time :]
and malfoy sr is wicked!
if dear quirinius is NOT possesed, where oh! where is dear lord v.?
The Dark Lord Mudblood
2009-11-21 . chapter 7
I've only gotten this far in the story, but I wanted to say I really like what you have here so far. I like Evan - I'm a sucker for a smooth-talking Dark Wizard ;) The way Voldemort acted towards Harry in the first chapter was interesting, it was clear that he was attracted towards him, but will Voldemort just let it be when it is clear Harry is, or will be, taken? I guess we'll have to wait. I look forward to the rest. Cheers.
Bella
2009-11-21 . chapter 19
okie seriously getting interesting.
im really hoping to read more so plz update son.
Story like this one is hard to come by. <3
SiilverStar
2009-11-20 . chapter 19
fantastic chapter.
update soon, i can't wait to see more Harry/Lucius interaction. :)
Jits
2009-11-20 . chapter 19
Great job !
Please hurry up with next chapter.
BOOMrobotdog
2009-11-18 . chapter 19
Ojh, look, I didn't review this. I am horrible at keeping up with this crap. At least you know by now.

So... were the Dursleys told to mistreat Harry? Why does Evan have to pretend to be horrible to Harry at King's Cross otherwise?

Yay, Lucius... though chan... \o?

and does Evan not quite like Harry yet? I think the relationship they have and the one they have in Life of Lies is messing me up...

What does Narcissa think of Lucius's obsession with Harry? cause if I were her...

Sacrifice was what?
SiriusBlackIsGod
2009-11-18 . chapter 19
Loved it, well done!
rubysp
2009-11-15 . chapter 19
I adore your interpretation of Evan Rosier and Harry under his tutelage.

Keep up the great work~
Katsy17
2009-11-15 . chapter 19
very interesting
love-of-my-existance
2009-11-13 . chapter 19
woo for the new chapter!
Mina Hikari
2009-11-13 . chapter 19
I can understand the feeling that Harry is feeling about the idea of his close expulsion being discovered by people that matter most to him and don't want to let down.

I hate it when people drag it out too much, using prose and such.

Lol, love the part where Harry mentions Evan's "urges".
Hehehe, liked the reactions to Lucius goodbye to Harry as well.

Just have to point out a few things, it probably should be 'through' instead of 'threw' "his fringe", and the link doesn't show. Did you put spaces in the link?

I enjoyed it. Good work.
SchwarzShifter
2009-11-12 . chapter 19
XD "As if he hadn't just kissed an eleven-year old" I love this story. I'm so glad there's another update! Please write whenever you can <3
lex1621
2009-11-11 . chapter 19
I still continue to enjoy this story and cannot wait for the next chapter!
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