that made me drool. they are so perfect for each other and u got han totally in character. congratz
listen, would u allow me to translate it to portuguese? Cause i want to show it to my friends. ;D
kisses

That was a great story. I've never read anything like that, you did that very well. It's definatly and unusual style but it turned out great!

hi just wanted to say this is really good writing. i don't agree with one of the other reviewers - the language in this seems to just come natually and it seems very realistic especially considering this is HAN SOLO's point of view we're eavesdropping on here. so, there, i think your writing rocks as it is one of the very few unique and heartfelt pieces of fiction on here so KEEP GOING and maybe do some experimenting as i'd like to see some more please. :P hehe long review sozzi just felt like expressin my opinion don't do it often XD

Thank-you for introducing me to this wonderful LJ comm. And your writing is ohmygoshINCREDIBLE! I'm a puddle of goo, thanks to you. -ignores the urge to say something about poets and not knowing it).

Fantastic!

Each of these are so perfect in its shortness. Amazing.

This paints a picture of the Han/Leia ship so nicely... you really have an idea of what Han must be feeling at each moment and why. Wonderful.

Pain, Plead, and Ready are some of the hottest sentences I've ever read...wow.

I have reread this story no fewer than eight times now. Part of it is trying to encourage my muse to come back from whatever dark corner of the universe she's found, but mostly because I adore this story. I adore you. I adore the fact that I ask for Han/Leia, and even though your muse has "abandoned" you (right), you come up with this piece of sheer brilliance, fucking-pure GENIUS, in, oh, about three seconds. So jealous.

Fave fave fave fave.

Miss you, love.

Excellent use of the prompts and I like your flowing from one to the next. #26, yes, he would wonder that, wouldn't he, a true touch of the Han brashness and a fine sense in #30 of their future.

I really don't know what to say about this chapter. Interesting how you've got it set up. Like the thoughts though, but I don't think you should've included the vulgar language. This is "sw" after all. Seems like you're taking the "purity" from it, if you know what I mean. But keep it coming.

I really really really liked this!
The style is different, but very cool.
Please write more! =D

I liked it!

Hey, I like that. Didn't quite get it until I read it a few times, but I really like it. Nice job!