 Lunar Kitty Kat 2009-03-14 . chapter 1Oh wow! You did a wonderful job with this fanfiction. I liked how well you showed Tommy passing through each stage of grief. I LOVED that in the end Tommy decided to fight for the one he loves. Can I beg you to write a sequel (or if not a sequel, more Tommy/Kim)? Anyway, welcome to Tommy/Kim fanfic writing! |
 Pink-Green-White-4ever 2009-03-11 . chapter 1Aw, sis, thank you! *grins* I loved new TK stuff.
First, let me say, this is definitely a new take on the whole letter thing. I hadn't even thought about the different stages of grief, and yeah, Tommy definitely would have gone through them with their breakup.
I personally think that you got the 18/19 year old Tommy. While he was definitely like most boys, Tommy was also sensitive, as was shown during Changing Of The Zords when she was losing her power coin. When it comes to Kim, Tommy found both his greatest strength and his greatest weakness.
I look forward to seeing more of them out of you! |