I love this it is fantastic! Good job at realistically portraying the characters. Poor Jareth he is so lucky that he has a stubborn girl like Sarah to fight for him in his time of greatest need. Good Job!

ALANNA

If this occurs when you watch Without a Trace, by all means, watch more!

I thought it was a lovely story, especially after Sarah freed Jareth. I don't suppose you'd write a sequel...?

Lovely. Gracefully written. I was pleased, actually, by the spoiled Toby - so few people are willing to contemplate a child that might _deserve_ to be wished away. But I think my favourite moments are the reunion at the circus and the moments leading up to the kiss.

I really enjoyed this look at Sarah and Jareth. For some reason, the image of Jareth chained in a circus is very disturbing and I can understand why Sarah would be so upset about it. I love how you showed her passion and her willingness to do whatever it took to free him. I also found in interesting that the only other people to recognize him were women...of course, he does leave quit the impression. :)

They are both two very stubborn people, but the ending showed wonderfully how they were able to get past that trait and see the loyalty and love that laid beneath!

Wonderful job! I do so enjoy your stories!

very interesting and good. .

aww I liked this story ... it's definitely not like other stories that I've read

nicely done

Wow, that was really good! At first, I didn't think it would be, but I decided to give it a chance, seeing as there's been a bit of a fic shortage lately. I was very pleasantly surprised! Nice job!

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Neaw, that was adorable!

And, I must say, finding out that Jareth had been chained to a circus kinda made me angry, but that's another time for obsession. XD

It's interesting going from some of your more... romantic stories to something like this. It's a pleasant change as well, because it allows us as readers to see that it's not just about the passion that you aim for- but the determination and devotion that the characters feel. This was a great story (even if Toby is a brat), and I hope to see more like this soon!

UV