So, that's it? Misty and Brock and Chris are dead? You know, I may JUST NOW be reading this story, almost a year after it was finished, but, may I say that: it was O.K, then it got a little bad, then it sucked! Finish it with some kinda dream-like ending! Like one of them waking up and finding out it was a dream, like in "Day of the Dead". O.K? good.

Aww, such a loving tale :P. Right, anyway, grate job Chu, Nao. *appluads* Lurve the suspence!

cool story but oes adsh not wanna strip cause he got a small dic

This could be a classic easily, Arti! (not that it isn't already) Horror ...*scary face*

It's great. But i like any fic by you.

Oh this is so ing bad

Um... this is weird! Remind me to not read a horror fic! How could you kill Misty?

Great story Arti! Gary and Freaka! It was scary! This should have been out by Halloween or something! It was scary the whole way through. Including the poker scene! Good work! This could be the next Blair Witch Project!

Cferra

...Interesting...

I don't even want to know what was going on there.

Um, is he gonna rape her or something?

Very... strange. Confused. Very.

Nice.

I really should say more than that. um. Really nice?

I can't wait for more.

Hey Freak I thought it was an hentai, dude... Well anyways it kicks ass keep it up Freak & Arti. Later...