*laughs like a pervert -thinks of Kakashi Hatake-* Yeah, I loved it! It was smexy xD Thanks for the great story =)

love this pairing

I really loved this. It was so cute and hot!

Sena was pretty brave there, climbing in Hiruma's bed and such. Do or die trying! :) But Hiruma is seme forever!
Thanks for the fic, this was my first ES21 yaoi. Since this was so great, I will absolutely search more HirumaXSena!

gah. *nose bleed*

*dead in her own blood*

Oh man, that line right in the middle--"I'm not fucking you with sand everywhere"--was perfect. Absolutely perfect. The surreality of this whole piece is perfect, too, and that last bit of unanswered question (an unanswered question of a question?) really left me hanging.

It was gorgeous and flowing and soothing and somehow, really sad and desperate, too. There was this sense of...bleakness, I suppose, that I just couldn't shake off. It was sweet at places, too, and the effect of everything together is just breathtaking.

Thank you for sharing this masterpiece.

Haha, great work!
The relationship on both sides was presented fantastically, and the style itself was very cool.
Keep it up! =D

Kind of a strange thought, taking Sena out to the middle of no where to screw him.

Very nicely done though.

Why do I have a feeling, that I've read this somewhere before? I think it was on LJ. I don't thinkk it was on your LJ profile though... anyway, I'm not saying that you've stolen it, it's just that the title and the summary are completely the same, not to mention the storyline and the aouthers note. SO was it on your profile on LJ, and I'm just mixing up my memories? I don't think so though, since I checked your LJ before I wrote this.
//DSP