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Evan10
2009-10-11 . chapter 8
Wow finally the ending is here and Cob is alive thank you
Animation Universe 2005
2009-10-05 . chapter 8
That's awesome! Great work, like always! I wish I could see more chapters from you.

--A.U. '05
OmegaDragon3000
2009-10-05 . chapter 8
Weird,whit that injury Crane should be death...he should...finally you update,i was thinking it gonna take months.
Evan10
2009-09-11 . chapter 7
IT'S BEEN TWO MONTHS ALREADY! WHY ARE YOU TAKING SO LONG!?
Evan10
2009-07-26 . chapter 7
I've got news for you next Monday is my birthday
gabster357
2009-07-08 . chapter 7
brill plot. I like revengeful plots. Cob is definetely coo, coo, in my opinion. Also like complicated & supernatural( read my story and you'll get it). Anyways, can't wait for more. Update quick, please! Adding you to story fav.!
082 Martian Scout
2009-07-06 . chapter 7
Well, nberma, I must say that I don't approve of the curse word. This story is rated K, as if for kids, not K+ for kids and up.

What if a kid who does not understand the word were to read it from your fanfic, they would surely think it's okay because it's on a rated K stories.

So here's a suggestion, either remove the curse word or change the ratings to at least T, because I'm awfully disappointed in you.
mcgormanp
2009-07-06 . chapter 7
Nice work. Hope nobody's offended by my suggestions because remember...this is only fun and creative.
Animation Universe 2005
2009-07-06 . chapter 7
That is awesome! Do MORE!

--A.U. '05
UltraGamer
2009-05-28 . chapter 6
Oh one thing I forgot to tell mr.mcgormanp the Ginga series is Japanese version not English but it it does have English Subtitle though GNG's subtitle is a little error but still.
UltraGamer
2009-05-28 . chapter 6
Wow, from the way Evan10 talk, it sound like he hates suicide.
P.S I have a message for mcgormanp I was going to tell him but the review on The Terrific Twelve won't let me because I'm not login so I hope he get this so listen up: If you've never seen anyone commit suicide before then go youtube find a user name michael14a his channel is full of Ginga series, look at Ginga Nagareboshi Gin episode 13 part 3 and you will see suicide.
Evan10
2009-05-27 . chapter 6
I did created Cob becease I thought a villain to fall in love with one of hero and heroine, so picked Viper and created Cob. Cob was my creation and let you have him, this was the first time my character was heard, letting him commit suicide was not what I had mine. I know this is your story and your idea and without a doubt, I know I don't count as voter. So whatever the attention decides on him well I rather not talk about it. I'll you and everyone else know on chapter 6.
UltraGamer
2009-05-27 . chapter 6
Cob is cool and I suggest he will never give up on Viper no matter what.
Chrissy Mullins
2009-05-27 . chapter 6
great chapter. idk how this should end, it's had to decide. Also, can't wait for "Kung Fu Panda: the series". i can't wait for that. :)
mcplangel32
2009-05-27 . chapter 6
awsome chapter, the beginning was cute, and the ending was realy well done, i cant wait to see what you decide to do next.
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