This is by far the best story on this site and every time i come on i check to see if you have updated. And you haven't. And it hurts. I check and check and it never turns to 18 chapters. I hate cliffhangers.

I love this story and I think it's so cute! Please update soon. =]

UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!

Its great writing. A good way of words and setting. Its the same as the movie but its deeper. Same plot outline but added more emotion and resoning behind the behavior of the characters. Good writing all together.

Aw this is such a great story!! keep Writing =D

yeah great chapter can’t wait for more so please update again as soon as you can do so.

its ok.

First, amazingly written. I mean seriously. The descriptions, the flow, everything. Second, an interesting perspective of what was going on in his head at this point. I'd never thought of it this way but it makes more than a little sense. Excellent job.

I love how you can figure out the scenes that wasn't shown in the movie.
I wouldn't have thought of some of these.
^_^

Aw, poor Austin. I understand about RL gettin' in the way of workin' on a fic. Just post 'em when you can. Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.

Aww, good emotional chap!

Whenever I watch the film, I always think to myself that I want to know what Austin is thinking - that I want him to speak out about what happened, just aloud to himself, or to his friends - but he doesn't.

But this chapter is EXACTLY what I imagine him thinking. It's perfect, and I love it.

Seriously seriously good job - and I really really really can't wait to read more! :)

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PLEASE! I WANT MORE! WRITE WRITE WRITE!

PLEASE

yeah great chapter can’t wait for more so please update again as soon as you can do so. Sorry about not updating the last 10 days because my hard drive was at my computer fixer guy and I have not access to my e-mails.