Fisrt off i have to say that i absolutely LOVE your writing. then i have to say that i am so glad that i found someone who actually writes about the movie unlike the ones who use the a cinderella story archives to write about the JB brothers. ugh *shivers and not the good kind*. also do you plan on just keeping these one shots or are you continuing any of them? because that would be AMAZING! and again amazing job and cant wait for more.
oh and our fanfic names start off the same> random piece of info i wanted to add.

awesome story! keep it up!

I was going to wait until I read all the chapters before reviewing, but I wanted to do it now. I love this story!
First off, every chapter, every moment was realistic-I could see each and every one in my head perfectly.
Everyone was in character. It all made sense. I love how you write Sam and Austin-it's hard not to judge characters sometimes when we write, but you never seem to-you seem to, I don't know- you get them, it shows-you know?
Lastly, I how you write Carter and his relationship with Sam-I find it adorable how protective of he is of her. I really think that would have come across if we'd been able to see more of him in the movie. I especially loved the line "I don't care if you are captain of the football team, student body president or the fact you could break me in two; if you hurt her I'll find some way to make you regret it for the rest of your life."
-Raspberry Parfait

Beautiful, exceedingly well written. Austin's character was unusually insightful, well written. Neither cheap jock playing emo, nor poet, and completely free of the pointless, obvious and referential exclamations, so common to teen stories, (esp. featuring surprise, conflict or pathos).

Refreshing.

This is absolutely sad, high school must be hell, in the US. lol.

Oh, that dance was so romantic and I could feel the tension ... you need to write a story, not one-shots, of Sam and Austin, maybe continue this chapter, chapter 15. It was amazing! I will try to review the other chapters when I can. Please continue, it was amazing and I'm waiting for more!

yeah great chapter can’t wait for more so please update again as soon as you can do so.

I can't really see how Brianna looking through her e-mails matters now. Austen is smart enough to realise/work out who Sam is now he knows her first name, I mean the next day when they meet in the corridor, he should notice her and realise who she is. Unless you just did that to create drama in which case my above statements are completely unnecessary lol
still good
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hehe, sweet. YAYs for the fluff lol
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I don't like this one as much but that's probably cos there is no romance, and I'm a romance junkie so... still good though, I like your writing style.
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xD at the last. I'm not sure if i like the bit where he doesn't recognise her after the mask is removed, I think he would, I mean he would have seen her around school a lot and he had been to the diner earlier that day. but it does make for good drama where she breaks down so not complaining :)
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o the irony xD that would be a great conversation for them to have, lol. Nice first oneshot
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Hey i really like your scenes! Theyre really realistic like they would actually happen in the movie.
And I kinda like how theyre not connected. Because each one doesnt relate to each other and theyre all sweet in their own way. I love them all! lol

I think you really did a great job. The movie was awesome, but there were moments where it really frustrated me. I think you did a good job and yours came out better.

Thank you for writing all these. I can tell you are an experienced writer. Everything flows well and your input to the invisible parts of the movie were nothing short of superb. I encourage you to keep writing and thanks again for sharing your masterpieces.