That was great!

When my 24 posse and I saw the scene where Renee sees Jack after Bill's death, the first words we said were, "Well, at least she knows that he has feelings."

Can't wait to read more of your 24 fan fics...

good stuff. i'm loving renee's character. i like your writing style

That was amazing, and so true.
You described the scene with Bill perfectly.
Beautiful job, I feel the need to favorite this.

omg this story was so good! it gave me goosebumps! i loved it alot and i want to read more!

I loved this! I really wish there were more out there like it, You did a great job!!