 KC-Chick 2009-08-16 . chapter 1Wonderful. This is all kinds of happiness. I love that they were all from separate years, different scenarios. Very fresh and crisp. My favorite was them at the speech for Obama. I could definitely see Rory doing such a thing and Jess being dragged there by his pals.
The ending was super creative, too! A blind date - and going back to their roots. Nice job! |
 Simply Sarah 2009-07-12 . chapter 1I loved this! I can't decide which one I like best though. I've actually been sitting here for a good five minutes reading over them again trying to decide, but they're all so great. I'm slightly leaning towards February 2008 because Jess and Rory don't really talk that much politics together in the show (that I remember), but the whole thing still seems extremely in character. Plus, Jess is persuaded to believe more in Rory than Obama, which is just genius.
Put simply, it was all perfection.
Sincerely,
Sarah |
 Jeremy Shane 2009-04-12 . chapter 1good story |
 Djux 2009-03-14 . chapter 1Nicely done, I liked it. Though you had some spelling mistakes, fix them and it will be cool. |
 Curley-Q 2009-03-13 . chapter 1nicely done. |
 Lizzy likes the hot guy 2009-03-13 . chapter 1that was amazing...
brilliant even
i hate that its a one shot though... *GLARE*
otherwise.. brilliant.. i love all the missed opportunities... so beautiful |
 Ghostwriter 2009-03-12 . chapter 1Ha ha ha ha. Cool. Catch ya on the flip side. |