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Reviews for: What Could Have Been
KC-Chick
2009-08-16 . chapter 1
Wonderful. This is all kinds of happiness. I love that they were all from separate years, different scenarios. Very fresh and crisp. My favorite was them at the speech for Obama. I could definitely see Rory doing such a thing and Jess being dragged there by his pals.

The ending was super creative, too! A blind date - and going back to their roots. Nice job!
Simply Sarah
2009-07-12 . chapter 1
I loved this! I can't decide which one I like best though. I've actually been sitting here for a good five minutes reading over them again trying to decide, but they're all so great. I'm slightly leaning towards February 2008 because Jess and Rory don't really talk that much politics together in the show (that I remember), but the whole thing still seems extremely in character. Plus, Jess is persuaded to believe more in Rory than Obama, which is just genius.

Put simply, it was all perfection.

Sincerely,
Sarah
Jeremy Shane
2009-04-12 . chapter 1
good story
Djux
2009-03-14 . chapter 1
Nicely done, I liked it. Though you had some spelling mistakes, fix them and it will be cool.
Curley-Q
2009-03-13 . chapter 1
nicely done.
Lizzy likes the hot guy
2009-03-13 . chapter 1
that was amazing...

brilliant even

i hate that its a one shot though... *GLARE*

otherwise.. brilliant.. i love all the missed opportunities... so beautiful
Ghostwriter
2009-03-12 . chapter 1
Ha ha ha ha. Cool. Catch ya on the flip side.
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