Hey Eli! XD I remembered!

Uh. Anyway. Went ahead and read this. Pretty awesome. Cute. What else can I say? I mean, honestly. You've heard it all from me. Been hearing it for the past twelve years. XD Ah, good times.

Shyah, so, keep writing. Oh. Call me one of these days, you B itc h.

-MartMart

Adorable. Plain and simple.

I want a ring like that, anyway it's good.

That was pretty cute, I think you succeeded in that. I love Hayate and Vita in the cafe, it's too bad everyone thinks she's crazy now. Suzuka sure thinks of some interesting ways to get them together. I really like the word choice in the end, the fact that you used like and not love made it a whole lot cuter. Sorry about your bad day. I hope things got better.

ok, this had me going WTF? Suzuka is just awesome by the way and Hayate seems like such a bad guy in this one. also, This...Is...SPARTA! and in Sparta, we hug people before we kill them. omg, that was just soo funny. Nanoha and Fate is just too cute in this. i practically melted reading this.

Cute one-shot. Liked seeing the mood ring change while Fate was talking to Suzuka. Liked how Nanoha kept teasing Fate so get reactions out of her. Liked how Fate got Nanoha.

Best NanoFate short story ever!
Kudos to you!

LOL! That was great. Cute, ya I think you got it. I love this part in the story (“I think someone said my name in vain.”) That to me was very funny. All and all was a very nice and cute story. Keep up the great work. Hope you write more.

So cute ~v~. I would have love to have a perfect confession at the end, but I guess that will be for later *hope*...
The ring stuff was a good idea to lead them to confess their feeling anyway.
I will be waiting for Melody : )

'“…Methinks we’re going to end up interrupting the awesome hotness of NanoFate.”'
HAHAHHAHA.

OH NO THIS IS SO FREAKING CUTE xD You're on a roll! :D And you made my day, AGAIN, you should so get an award.
I couldn't stop laughing at random parts of of the fic, seriously. :P Your humour pwns mine. So hard. You should write more seriously. xD
I love the descriptions. ): And the ending is like WHOA. WOAH. WAOH.
And I realised I cannot express what I want to say properly. Blah, I'm sure you can imagine though. So. :D

The idea! Is so awesome, I'm almost envious I didn't think of something that cute. :P
Seriously. How do you write humour with so much style D: I'm jealous gah. And
PS: Hey does this mean I get what I request for!? :D Cause I was totally joking when I 'demanded' that fic, but now I see the awesomeness of this opportunity... 8D And I 'request' for MOAR. :K

PPS: I was trying to change my reputation -_-; Since I think people think I'm some rabid fangirl who's prone to hyper outbursts. But oh no I'm FAILING badly but it's not my fault that your stuff gets me excited, no? xDD No, it's your fault!!

PS: You sound **. Aw. *pets* *pokes* *ruffles* *gloomps* There, all better. :D

WHE!


And before I forget, THANK YOU! xDD

xoxoxoxoxooxoxoxooxoxox.
^ Eh I think that's too many. People all going to start getting jealous. *snickers*

I'd love a Fate other half... need to find myself one I think :P

Yay for "pointless" fluff!

It's nice to read something like this from you now and then, since your fics are usually drama and angst. I hope that writing something this cute served to ease your mood, this kind of happy fics always make my days better, so thanks a lot for writing this, it was really cute, and you almost killed another fan due to cuteness overload xD

I'll be looking forward to Melody then~

Have a nice day ^^

Well, well, soldier...

This was A-D-O-Rable.
High school girls cuteness all over. LOL
And just a tiny lil' bit of skinship.
Too bad Fate didn't just kiss Nanoha instead of sayin' "I like you too".
Damn. LMAO

All in all, fuzzy, fluffy and sweet.
Nice work, son.

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

You did wonderful for cute! Over
Love it. It was adorable and the quite humor was welcome and really funny too .
:) My congrats for this explendit one-shot.
I should ask for more, a second chap or something, but I know you're bussy. So I will not. I remind you, although, I'm waiting for updates on your other stories.

Greetings and take care.
Thanks for keeping writing

Cute~

If you are aiming for something cute, you have done more than a good job.

Fate should've kissed Nanoha instead of saying "I like you too". Moar skinship FTW. LOL.